My Rena art attempt

[Guilmon and a shotgun]

I'd have to disagree with you Gabu, but i think the inked just looks a messy job...the colored version is probably the best, even if it lacks shadow or shading. But besides that AND apart from the fact you didn't take the time to ink in the pencil lines Solivagus, it is a really good colouring job!

And with the gloves i think some creases around the elbow joint area of them would bring out their '3D'ness as it were.

Overall, a nice piece of work, hope you keep at it!