11-20-2008, 08:31 AM
Quote:Yeah, I see what you are saying. But I actually want Takato & Guilmon to have developing feelings about why they love each other, instead of every other fanfic where Takato wants to fuck Guilmon out of the blue for no reason
Actually, you got a point there, but trust me. A well written piece of work with enough pages (Not too few, not too many) can despict and discern what you want just fine. Not all fics are the same anyways, and talking about fan fics, here's the link I promised:
http://www.yiffstar.com/?pid=23726
Enjoy the read, and good luck with your writing.