05-26-2004, 03:34 PM
Hmm, Chapter 3 was one of the better ones in my opinion. I know it's unusual for Gomamon to be so emotional, but since this story occurs when he's older, and has experienced loss of a loved one, I justify that. I thought it would be a good way to introduce the characters as close friends, hence their oath "As We would our partners" meaning they treat each other as so.
As you've noticed, Gatomon's and Veemon's relationship has died down in this story, but they're still on good terms. Gomamon is trying to get over his loss but can't manage, so Veemon and Gatomon feel it is their duty to keep him happy, because they know he needs his optimism to stay intact.
Originally, I was going to have Kayetomon as a main character, but it didn't work, so he leaves in chapter 4. Sorry for the lack of action in that chapter, there will be much more, trust me
As you've noticed, Gatomon's and Veemon's relationship has died down in this story, but they're still on good terms. Gomamon is trying to get over his loss but can't manage, so Veemon and Gatomon feel it is their duty to keep him happy, because they know he needs his optimism to stay intact.
Originally, I was going to have Kayetomon as a main character, but it didn't work, so he leaves in chapter 4. Sorry for the lack of action in that chapter, there will be much more, trust me