05-23-2004, 08:49 AM
review chapter 2:
well chapter 1 was good, but the chapter 2 was better in my books.
Nah, I don't mean from the writings. I mean from the storyline. Simple, coz the first was the intro chapter.
So what do I have to say.
The begin was the meeting between Gennai and the Digimon, who are now like Digidestined itself. Then it switched to the other Digimon, which was the main figure for their first sidequest. After cleaned the DarkOtamamon from their virus, they got back to the town again and rescues themselves.
You put comedy, dramatic and the fight into the scenes, which makes them to a good read. I like that you are explaining a lot there, coz it helps me to make a picture off that all. The scenes with Veemon and Gatomon was pretty funny and the story really forced me to read it till the end again.
Fazit: I like the reading of chapter 2 and I see a lot of potential in this stories. Thumbs up ^^
well chapter 1 was good, but the chapter 2 was better in my books.
Nah, I don't mean from the writings. I mean from the storyline. Simple, coz the first was the intro chapter.
So what do I have to say.
The begin was the meeting between Gennai and the Digimon, who are now like Digidestined itself. Then it switched to the other Digimon, which was the main figure for their first sidequest. After cleaned the DarkOtamamon from their virus, they got back to the town again and rescues themselves.
You put comedy, dramatic and the fight into the scenes, which makes them to a good read. I like that you are explaining a lot there, coz it helps me to make a picture off that all. The scenes with Veemon and Gatomon was pretty funny and the story really forced me to read it till the end again.
Fazit: I like the reading of chapter 2 and I see a lot of potential in this stories. Thumbs up ^^