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07-28-2007, 10:02 AM (This post was last modified: 07-28-2007, 10:03 AM by Wisemon.)

It needs work. You can start by proofreading. Here's a hint: Check your tenses.

"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against

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RE: Despare of a Leader - by Wisemon - 07-28-2007, 10:02 AM