Yeah sure I might do harm and bear my right to arm

[Wisemon]

*sniff* Beautiful. It bears amazing resemblance to the thoughts that race through my head every time I sit in the loo, taking a dump! Bravo.

Actually, I've written some of my best poems while taking a dump, though this wasn't one of them. A reliable clipboard is very convenient.

Now then, Incredibly great work Wise. You almost have to ask how you can do this.

Thank you, but I feel it's best not to question it. If I had to give out the secret, I would say the real key is just putting time into it.

The whole thing just makes you think. And it has this driving force that made me want to read the whole thing, which is odd for me because generally I don't like poetry. It was damn good.

The last stanza is true poetics right there.

Thank you, Senjuro. I especially like good reviews from people who don't normally like poetry. You pointed out another key: the last stanza is always critical.

A very provokative poem which has a clear messahe and some critisism for all sides of the arguement. I loved it.

Thanks, I guess I did hit all sides. I try to do that on every issue. That's why I wanted to mod the Debate Forum.