04-06-2004, 04:13 PM
Quote:*sarcasm* Oh YES, El. Just give Prophet advice by telling him his comic SUCKS!
*ending sarcasm* Yes, that's the WORST answer since hitting a child for resorting to violence!
You idiot! Instead of TELLING him something so unhelpful, give him some REAL advice on what to do with it! WHAT shoudl be done to put some sense into this manga.
My my, such anger in such a young fella. XD
Sorry if you don't like it, dude, but I do not sugarcoat anything, I say it like I see it. If I can give Prophet some advice in how to make this manga better, well I'll do it right now, I got three:
1) Remember the bit of plot in the beginning, about someone bringing back digimon? Try to focus back on that again, even for a bit, as it'll add more sense to the action.
2) Speaking of making sense, I understand you wanting to use a lot of characters here, makes for more variety. However, try to at least keep something sticking to reality. Cuz I just find it real hard to believe that a bisexual cross-species orgy with monsters and underaged kids in a park in broad daylight can suddenly spring up so incredibly easy.
3) I do know the difficulty of working with a big ammount of characters, but leaving them out of the spotlight (or even out of entire existance) for rather long periods of time does not help much (best example being the huge absense of Leomon and Anubimon during the midst of the manga). best to give various characters a spotlight for various pages, assuring all will appear.
There, gave some advice, and tried to keep the tone down. And as for that last page added, I just keep wodnering what is it with you americans and your sometimes strange holidays, like April Fools? Oh well, I'll just leave the benefit of the doubt in it all, I just haven't had some nasty experiences with April Fools Day due to my american relatives.