03-28-2004, 05:30 PM
Chapter 8: Peace at Last!!
After the trip to the cabin, things calmed down at the appartment where Sora and Jun lived. They paid the rent, before hand as not to get evicted. Sora, was still having remorse over her behavior towards Jun. Sora, now decided that she wasn't worthy for Jun. Sora decided to go inside the bathroom and end her life...however, she didn't bother to lock the door seeing as there's nobody else at home.
****inside the bathroom, with a razor blade to her wrists***
Sora: (crying) Sorry, Jun, I don't deserve you. (starts to slash her wrists)
Jun: (Walking in and snatches up the blade before Sora could do anything) SORA!
Sora: (crying) Why would you want to stay with me after all I put you through!
Jun: Sora, we've already established this at the cabin a month ago.
Sora: DID WE?!?
Jun: You're not gonna take your life! What's that going to accomplish?!
Sora: I don't even deserve you.
(Jun smacks Sora clear across the face...then runs away to her bedroom)
Sora: I deserve it.
Jun: (crying) Why won't she listen..
(Sora picks up a pill bottle and downs it with more powerful pills than what Jun had)
Jun: (runs back to the bathroom) Sora, no, NO!! (rushes to call an ambulance)
(five minutes later the ambulance comes and rushes Sora to the hospital)
***at the hospital, this time is Jun, Mrs. Takenouchi, Yolei, and Kari***
Kari: Jun, I know you've tried to commit suicide.
Jun: How, Davis and Yolei promised not to tell...
Kari: I had he figured out when she came to my place and started crying uncontrollably.
Jun: Oh, I wish Sora was listening when I told her that I loved her.
Yolei: I hope she's alright.
Mrs. Takenouchi: I hope so too, Yolei.
(Dr. Ootori comes into the waiting room...with an unpleasant look on her face)
Dr. Ootori: I have some bad news, you all...Sora didn't make it.
Mrs. Takenouchi: What, are you joking, please tell me you're joking??
Dr. Ootori: Sorry, let's go back and see her...for the final time.
(they go back and Sora's monitors are flatlined)
Nurse: Ootori...she's gone...permantly.
Dr. Ootori: Estimated time of death please?
Nurse: 22:43 (10:43 p.m.)
Yolei: (tearing up) Oh, no (runs back to the waiting room, with Kari following her)
(Mrs. Takenouchi has started crying uncontrollably, with Jun)
Dr. Ootori: (pulls a sheet over Sora) Sorry, we've done all that we can.
Mrs. Takenouchi: SORA!!! (continues crying)
(The nurse takes Sora to the morgue for an autopsy, and Ootori escorts Jun and Mrs Takenouchi to the waiting area)
***At the appartment***
Super: Motomiya, your rent's late, now if you don't pay....
Building owner: Stifle yourself...can't you see that Sora, her roomate and lover, had just died tonight?
Super: Tonight!!! How!!!
Jun: She committed suicide. (she has a blank stare facing the window)
Super: (cooled down) oh, sorry, I didn't know.
Building owner: Ms. Motomiya, even though your rent's late, I'm a good friend of your father's.
Jun: Yeah.
Building owner: I'll let you stay here rent free, so you can finish your schooling ok.
Jun: Thank you, sir.
Super: Sir I think it's wise that she get's somebody...
Building owner: I know, I know.
(They leave)
The death of Sora Takenouchi has taken a serious toll on everybody. Jun has promised herself not to kill herself, or to date anybody else again. Mrs. Takenouchi has tried to commit suicide to be with Sora for an eternity, but failed. Tai, Izzy and Davis were all sorry, that they were hard on Sora. Yolei and Kari couldn't even make love for fear of what might happen to them.
After the trip to the cabin, things calmed down at the appartment where Sora and Jun lived. They paid the rent, before hand as not to get evicted. Sora, was still having remorse over her behavior towards Jun. Sora, now decided that she wasn't worthy for Jun. Sora decided to go inside the bathroom and end her life...however, she didn't bother to lock the door seeing as there's nobody else at home.
****inside the bathroom, with a razor blade to her wrists***
Sora: (crying) Sorry, Jun, I don't deserve you. (starts to slash her wrists)
Jun: (Walking in and snatches up the blade before Sora could do anything) SORA!
Sora: (crying) Why would you want to stay with me after all I put you through!
Jun: Sora, we've already established this at the cabin a month ago.
Sora: DID WE?!?
Jun: You're not gonna take your life! What's that going to accomplish?!
Sora: I don't even deserve you.
(Jun smacks Sora clear across the face...then runs away to her bedroom)
Sora: I deserve it.
Jun: (crying) Why won't she listen..
(Sora picks up a pill bottle and downs it with more powerful pills than what Jun had)
Jun: (runs back to the bathroom) Sora, no, NO!! (rushes to call an ambulance)
(five minutes later the ambulance comes and rushes Sora to the hospital)
***at the hospital, this time is Jun, Mrs. Takenouchi, Yolei, and Kari***
Kari: Jun, I know you've tried to commit suicide.
Jun: How, Davis and Yolei promised not to tell...
Kari: I had he figured out when she came to my place and started crying uncontrollably.
Jun: Oh, I wish Sora was listening when I told her that I loved her.
Yolei: I hope she's alright.
Mrs. Takenouchi: I hope so too, Yolei.
(Dr. Ootori comes into the waiting room...with an unpleasant look on her face)
Dr. Ootori: I have some bad news, you all...Sora didn't make it.
Mrs. Takenouchi: What, are you joking, please tell me you're joking??
Dr. Ootori: Sorry, let's go back and see her...for the final time.
(they go back and Sora's monitors are flatlined)
Nurse: Ootori...she's gone...permantly.
Dr. Ootori: Estimated time of death please?
Nurse: 22:43 (10:43 p.m.)
Yolei: (tearing up) Oh, no (runs back to the waiting room, with Kari following her)
(Mrs. Takenouchi has started crying uncontrollably, with Jun)
Dr. Ootori: (pulls a sheet over Sora) Sorry, we've done all that we can.
Mrs. Takenouchi: SORA!!! (continues crying)
(The nurse takes Sora to the morgue for an autopsy, and Ootori escorts Jun and Mrs Takenouchi to the waiting area)
***At the appartment***
Super: Motomiya, your rent's late, now if you don't pay....
Building owner: Stifle yourself...can't you see that Sora, her roomate and lover, had just died tonight?
Super: Tonight!!! How!!!
Jun: She committed suicide. (she has a blank stare facing the window)
Super: (cooled down) oh, sorry, I didn't know.
Building owner: Ms. Motomiya, even though your rent's late, I'm a good friend of your father's.
Jun: Yeah.
Building owner: I'll let you stay here rent free, so you can finish your schooling ok.
Jun: Thank you, sir.
Super: Sir I think it's wise that she get's somebody...
Building owner: I know, I know.
(They leave)
The death of Sora Takenouchi has taken a serious toll on everybody. Jun has promised herself not to kill herself, or to date anybody else again. Mrs. Takenouchi has tried to commit suicide to be with Sora for an eternity, but failed. Tai, Izzy and Davis were all sorry, that they were hard on Sora. Yolei and Kari couldn't even make love for fear of what might happen to them.