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With all of the sexual metaphors in there, I'm just glad that you didn't take the one that I just used. I love that style, but I'm always afraid to use it because I think my reader will get lost. I applaud your courage for not pandering. You've convinced me to do my biggest "scene" in solid metaphor (I was considering it anyway). That won't be for several months, but I'll try to work faster. Like I said, you're getting better and better. In many ways, you're better than me. I've got a bit of an ego, and I don't admit this easily; just ask Urban Dream. I can't wait to see your next technique.
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[No subject] - by AnironUndomiel - 03-02-2004, 12:50 PM
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