The Shadow of a Love (my first lemon, be nice guys ^_^)

[Wisemon]

(i wrote his past with mine, a little something i learned from wisemon). I always identified with daisuke while i was watching the show, and i guess i just wanted to impose my own personality onto such a simialr character.

Wow, I just received the ultimate compliment. However, I think the part you're talking about was edited out of the current version of "Fat" (the lemon that partially influenced this one). When I corrected the first five, I took out most of the stuff I considered to be "corny crap" about myself. If you haven't read the first five since they were refined (December 2, 2003), please read them again, especially the first one. I wasn't too proud of what I had before. Except for the first one, the changes aren't major, but they matter to me, and as someone who appreciates my work, I'd want you to see my best effort. If you really like my stuff, don't feel shy about leaving a comment for the bottom of my lemons page. In return, now that I know your email, I'll email you the 16th chapter sometime in the next few days.

Now, on to your story. Like I said, you just paid me the ultimate compliment. At first, the "I love you"'s seemed a little rushed, but on the second reading it looked believable, especially since Daisuke said it first (you see, Hikari, that's not out of character). I'm a big fan of Daisuke, but I'm not a fan of his coupling with Hikari (somehow, I don't think that's how this will end anyway), but if it happened, this is how I'd like to see it happen. It might've been more believable if Hikari didn't accept Daisuke at first, but then you'd be complimenting me a little too much. I also believe that there was always more to Daisuke. With the exception of Junpei, I relate to him better than any other character. He seems cool to make friends, but he really doesn't have any real friends. You're getting better and better. Keep up the outstanding work.

But in fact i only offered a more detailed version of the characters. The daisuke in the show and the daisuke in my story are not far apart, and could coexist if allowed.

You chose coexistence; I chose exaggeration. We both got criticized for being out of character.

If you do not have the intelligence or patience to enjoy such substantial works, and only like the ones where only a sex scene (however bizarre or descriptive) occurrs, then i suggest that you stop reading my lemon any further and refrain from coming into this thread again. for i can assure you that despite your efforts to try to change this lemon, you will not accomplish your goal. The stroy will continue as i see fit, and if you have a problem with that, then i suggest that you can do to yourself some of the lucrative things from the many artless lemons around.

Yeah, suck on that. Suck on it long, and suck on it hard.