The Shadow of a Love (my first lemon, be nice guys ^_^)

[Wisemon]

Hold on, is Yamato gay in your story, or was that just a joke? Personally, I've always felt that he was the most likely to be gay among both the first and second season roster (unless you count Michael). So if that's the case, that's fine by me.

You definitely have a knack for humor and this kind of writing in general. It's too bad that you're new to the English language, because otherwise, what you have could look like a true contender (whatever that means). Fortunately, you could probably get someone to proofread it for you when you're done. Of course, I don't know how up to date that lemonaid section is.