02-18-2004, 11:58 AM
Interesting story... the pace it was written at surprises me very little, it's no sorprise that good authors also can write quickly... partly because a truly good author never accepts delays on a project, such as Writer's Block...
Anyhow, a story that I can identify with (because I identify with Takato, not because I'm homeless)... It's effective, but who exactly is this older man? Jan'yuu Lee? Yamaki? I hope you write more on this story, because I don't feel like it's complete...
Anyhow, a story that I can identify with (because I identify with Takato, not because I'm homeless)... It's effective, but who exactly is this older man? Jan'yuu Lee? Yamaki? I hope you write more on this story, because I don't feel like it's complete...