My lemon

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*blows whistle*okay guys knock it off, first off what does that frontier lemon have to do with my lemon? sheesh if you guys gonna flame each other do it on pm or somewhere else and not here

Funny, I could have sworn we were having a conversation... One about whether it was my right to tell you your fic is bad or not.*

It is. A large part of that is because of the bashing. You could make it better by taking out the bashing.

Also, I have to ask you this: you apologized to the Veegato and Daikari fans. I have to wonder if you're unable to separate the characters from the ships. This is slightly odd because the characters are from the show, but the ships are all from the fandom. Yes, that does mean Takari and Patagato as well as Daikari and Veegato. They are not canon and are unlikely to ever be.

Furthermore, people can be fans of characters without being fans of whatever the popular ships for that character are, just as people can be fans of shippings between characters that don't interest them.

You might want to remember this the next time you write a fic. Just dispense with apologizing to the shippers since you aren't obligated in any way to give them what they want in the way of ships - and apologize to the fans of the characters you choose to bash. You ARE writing them as doing stuff that they would never, ever do in canon and/or having them be tortured on authorial whim. Just a suggestion.

Finally,

Dispense with that officious tone. It is annoying, especially coming from you.




* - er, uh. I feel bad about taking the edge off of my rant, but I did want to point out that the discussion ensued because Wisemon misunderstood what I was saying. Not that I blame him - I don't think I phrased my initial post all that clearly.