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The Video, a Tamers Lemon
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03-05-2007, 11:10 AM
Wisemon Wrote:1. Except for Ruki, the Tamers all live in apartments.
2. Your Takato and Juri have no characterization.
3. You're ripping off a movie that wasn't that good to begin with, which might be a microcosm for your lack of discernment.

It's just a short piece to give a reason for the rest of the fic...

The rest will be a lot better...

Edit: And what movie are you talking about?
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The Video, a Tamers Lemon - by CloneWarrior - 03-05-2007, 01:19 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 03-05-2007, 03:32 AM
[No subject] - by Erethzium - 03-05-2007, 03:34 AM
[No subject] - by UnknownH - 03-05-2007, 03:45 AM
[No subject] - by CloneWarrior - 03-05-2007, 11:10 AM
[No subject] - by CloneWarrior - 03-05-2007, 11:59 AM
[No subject] - by UnknownH - 03-06-2007, 03:02 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 03-06-2007, 12:26 PM
[No subject] - by UnknownH - 03-07-2007, 03:00 AM