02-20-2007, 04:33 AM
Quote:However, as a peice of original fiction, it's good, very Lord of the Flies.That's exactly what I had in mind, or at least, one of the influences. If you're disturbed now, just wait...
Here's the next few chapters:
[color=black]4. The Antagonist
We woke up late and reversed through the woods.
The optimist and the pragmatist weren
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against