12-14-2003, 11:57 PM
Hey, that really wasn't bad! :) It wasn't too short, had a lot of clear descriptions and was pretty believable. Rock on! ^^
First Chapter of my new series
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First Chapter of my new series - by Lord Patamon - 12-13-2003, 04:52 PM
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