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The Unpublished Works of Mullen.
#11
Out of all those little pieces, I think I enjoyed your "anonymous" disclaimer the most.

As for the big fic, I wasn't a fan of the instant messenger scenes, too hard to read. The rest of it was fairly enjoyable (I skipped over the parts I found icky).

You did a good job getting down a messy room for Daisuke, his possible jealousies, all that stuff. You did an okay job on Koushiro, though the real key to him is scientific terms. Everybody else was decent. I had some believability issues with parts of it, especially the doorbell.

Well, that's about all I want to say on this one. I'm getting hemorrhoids from my sit-up routine, but it's worth it if I can get those tuned abs. Wink
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The Unpublished Works of Mullen. - by Herr Mullen - 07-17-2006, 01:04 AM
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