08-26-2003, 02:15 AM
Urban, this is for you.
*hands urban dream a trophy with a plaque reading "HE FUCKING FIGURED IT OUT, PEOPLE, GIVE THIS MAN A HAND!"*
There. Enjoy. ^_^
*bows to Darkfox* Your words are most kind, Darkfox-san. May you live eternally in a house full of bare naked ladies. ^_^
And Tiamat, I wasn't feeling that in-tune with the story when I wrote it. With this I felt better, but I'm thinking it's going to require a little editing when all's said and done. :oops: Thanks for your words. ^_^
Enjoy, everyone, or I'll eat your souls. ^_^
I'd like to let it be known here that I'm officially taking a break from coloring to focus on writing. *pumps fists* YEAH! ^^
Scene...er...8? Yeah, that's right. 8. I was 8 once. Kari's 8. Yeah. I 8 some chicken last night... *gets thwapped* Ow...
***
Sometime between blinking and seeing the girl had turned, and now faced Tai. He took the barest look at her face before his eyes dipped down and instantaneously locked themselves on her breasts, which quivered tantalizingly under her thin, pink cotton shirt. So round, so so round...
He noticed he could see the points of her nipples pressing against the tight fabric, and half his brain slumped into a numb void, a black hole of conscious thought. His mouth hung slightly open, his breath coming and going in thin puffs. His penis, which had remained flaccid and quiet since Kari had barged into his room, rose with a cry of glee in his shorts and dived for those beautiful tits.
A giggle--girly and somehow sensual--brought Tai
*hands urban dream a trophy with a plaque reading "HE FUCKING FIGURED IT OUT, PEOPLE, GIVE THIS MAN A HAND!"*
There. Enjoy. ^_^
*bows to Darkfox* Your words are most kind, Darkfox-san. May you live eternally in a house full of bare naked ladies. ^_^
And Tiamat, I wasn't feeling that in-tune with the story when I wrote it. With this I felt better, but I'm thinking it's going to require a little editing when all's said and done. :oops: Thanks for your words. ^_^
Enjoy, everyone, or I'll eat your souls. ^_^
I'd like to let it be known here that I'm officially taking a break from coloring to focus on writing. *pumps fists* YEAH! ^^
Scene...er...8? Yeah, that's right. 8. I was 8 once. Kari's 8. Yeah. I 8 some chicken last night... *gets thwapped* Ow...
***
Sometime between blinking and seeing the girl had turned, and now faced Tai. He took the barest look at her face before his eyes dipped down and instantaneously locked themselves on her breasts, which quivered tantalizingly under her thin, pink cotton shirt. So round, so so round...
He noticed he could see the points of her nipples pressing against the tight fabric, and half his brain slumped into a numb void, a black hole of conscious thought. His mouth hung slightly open, his breath coming and going in thin puffs. His penis, which had remained flaccid and quiet since Kari had barged into his room, rose with a cry of glee in his shorts and dived for those beautiful tits.
A giggle--girly and somehow sensual--brought Tai