06-20-2003, 11:11 PM
I like it.
The sketch itself is very good; I really like the details added in places, like the rings in Ryokumon's left hand. They are a nice touch and remove the simplicity the picture may have seemed to have. Adding more lines to emphasize the fur would help, though, especially in the tail.
Colouring is quite good too. I think the yellow colour of the body is a bit too dull, but otherwise I can't spot many flaws. The shading is good, and the different purples used are a nice addition. Try using a bit of white in the grey spots.
I'm not sure if I like the background. It helps to highlight Ryokumon's stats, but it also makes the sketch itself stand out too much. I suggest just using a light colour instead of white; maybe a simple pattern too.
The sketch in the background didn't turn out as good, admittedly. More shadows there would certainly do the job.
That's all I have to say. Keep up the good work, and don't let the lack of reviews discourage you!
The sketch itself is very good; I really like the details added in places, like the rings in Ryokumon's left hand. They are a nice touch and remove the simplicity the picture may have seemed to have. Adding more lines to emphasize the fur would help, though, especially in the tail.
Colouring is quite good too. I think the yellow colour of the body is a bit too dull, but otherwise I can't spot many flaws. The shading is good, and the different purples used are a nice addition. Try using a bit of white in the grey spots.
I'm not sure if I like the background. It helps to highlight Ryokumon's stats, but it also makes the sketch itself stand out too much. I suggest just using a light colour instead of white; maybe a simple pattern too.
The sketch in the background didn't turn out as good, admittedly. More shadows there would certainly do the job.
That's all I have to say. Keep up the good work, and don't let the lack of reviews discourage you!