05-12-2003, 11:22 AM
Before I start, I will state your story is not plagerism of my Diaries series, but similarities being a 'coincedence' I find hard to believe.
Your story is yours, and told in your own words. However, there are too many things in this that existed in Diaries in some form or another for there to not to be some influence at some point. Red Digivice Entry 13 - Slumber Party and Entry 14 Obsession are both a few years old and were written when Tamers was new in Japan.
First, the legal minimum age to have nude pictures made of someone in Japan is eighteen.
I mentioned in RDD Entry 13, Slumber Party, the age to buy it at fifteen and Sora purchased it stating she was sixteen.
Second, 'my ass is open for business' here's the direct quote from my fict (Musume, Yukimi, and Dachi are Hikari's childhood friends.)
Musume nodded. "Um, go out on the balcony and scream as loud as you can, 'my ass is open for business.'"
The room crashed to the floor in mass face-fault.
"Just getting into the game," Musume nervously giggled.
"All right." Yukimi got up and went to the balcony. "MUSUME'S ASS IS OPEN FOR BUSINESS!" She walked back in with a smirk.
"I didn't tell you say THAT." Musume blushed fiercely.
"You said 'my ass,' so I interpreted as being your ass." Yukimi tried to look innocent but failed. "Was I wrong?"
"Very," Miyako quipped. "Dachi?"
Also, I'm surprised no one mentioned the bananas:
Yukimi grinned. "Mimi, I dare you to give that lizard a blow job."
V-mon stared. "Say wha?!"
Mimi's eyes widened in shock. "What?! I can't!"
Yukimi folded her arms. "Would Jyou consider being with a digimon a threat to your relationship, especially if part of a game?"
"After how many times I've been hit on, he might," Mimi retorted.
"Would you rather fuck and anal bananas?" Yukimi asked.
Mimi paused. "The bananas."
Other points of similarity with Diaries, including entry 14:
Opening and closing with a diary entry.
Yamato is gay.
Iori brought prune juice for himself while Yamato brought beer and sake for everyone else at an all male party (Takeru's bachelor party).
Koushiro downloading porn.
Jun crashing the party.
Two people of the same sex having sex, masturbation, and bringing in someone of opposite sex for orgy.
Your story is yours, and told in your own words. However, there are too many things in this that existed in Diaries in some form or another for there to not to be some influence at some point. Red Digivice Entry 13 - Slumber Party and Entry 14 Obsession are both a few years old and were written when Tamers was new in Japan.
Quote:"It's illegal. Porn of kids 16 and under is illegal here in Japan."
"Damn! Well..." Davis thought for a bit. "Ok since you're old enough, I want you to go to the patio, bare your butt and yell at the top of your voice 'My ass is open for business'"
Izzy glared but obliged as he got up and walked to the patio door, slid it open and stepped out in the balcony. He proceeded to pull his pants down and stuck his ass out and then yelled "Davis' ass is open for business!"
"Hey I didn't say that!" Davis cried.
"Ah but you did. You said, and I quite 'my ass' so I interpreted your order referring to your ass." Izzy said with a smirk before sitting down and taking a sip of sake. After he sat the bottle down, he drew another name. "Davis, what do you want?"
"Dare"
"Ok. Can I get back to you later?" Izzy asked. "I can't think of something yet.
Davis sighed "Ok." He was actually relieved that he wouldn't do something nasty just yet.
TK squeaked "My turn!" He stopped as he swallowed hard. "Sorry" he said in normal voice. "Must be the drink." When he drew the name, he said "Tai again?"
Tai groaned loudly, it seems everyone was picking him a lot. "I'll take dare since I used truth with Matt."
"Just a sec" TK said as he got up and stepped through the group, his naked dick bouncing around a bit. When he returned from the kitchen, he handed Tai a banana. "It's obvious my brother fancies you. Better start getting used to backdoor sex." He said with a grin. "Shove it as deep as you can.
Cody gulped hard, he's never heard of backdoor sex but it sounded bad. He and everyone watched as Tai shifted position so he was on his knees and his ass high in the air. With some effort, he managed to work the banana right at the anus. He tried as hard as he could but had trouble getting it going as the banana was dry. Cody's eyes widened as he saw that.
First, the legal minimum age to have nude pictures made of someone in Japan is eighteen.
I mentioned in RDD Entry 13, Slumber Party, the age to buy it at fifteen and Sora purchased it stating she was sixteen.
Second, 'my ass is open for business' here's the direct quote from my fict (Musume, Yukimi, and Dachi are Hikari's childhood friends.)
Musume nodded. "Um, go out on the balcony and scream as loud as you can, 'my ass is open for business.'"
The room crashed to the floor in mass face-fault.
"Just getting into the game," Musume nervously giggled.
"All right." Yukimi got up and went to the balcony. "MUSUME'S ASS IS OPEN FOR BUSINESS!" She walked back in with a smirk.
"I didn't tell you say THAT." Musume blushed fiercely.
"You said 'my ass,' so I interpreted as being your ass." Yukimi tried to look innocent but failed. "Was I wrong?"
"Very," Miyako quipped. "Dachi?"
Also, I'm surprised no one mentioned the bananas:
Yukimi grinned. "Mimi, I dare you to give that lizard a blow job."
V-mon stared. "Say wha?!"
Mimi's eyes widened in shock. "What?! I can't!"
Yukimi folded her arms. "Would Jyou consider being with a digimon a threat to your relationship, especially if part of a game?"
"After how many times I've been hit on, he might," Mimi retorted.
"Would you rather fuck and anal bananas?" Yukimi asked.
Mimi paused. "The bananas."
Other points of similarity with Diaries, including entry 14:
Opening and closing with a diary entry.
Yamato is gay.
Iori brought prune juice for himself while Yamato brought beer and sake for everyone else at an all male party (Takeru's bachelor party).
Koushiro downloading porn.
Jun crashing the party.
Two people of the same sex having sex, masturbation, and bringing in someone of opposite sex for orgy.