05-06-2003, 01:11 PM
For a comedy fict like the one you're making, you WANT to go beyond bounderies, you WANT people to go 'what the fuck?!' It's the entire point.
Now if you don't want yaoi references, that's fine. But there's still the point of Kari going 'Gee, I had sex with my brother. Oh, well.' Which can work, but only if Tai is going nuts about the chance he may have knocked up his own sister.
As for Davis bashing. Placing him as main suspect when his sister is more likely to do it and Matt is more likely to have the means to do it does lessen the trust they show for him. Then they leave him to be screwed by Jun when he's pleading mercy. And Kari insulting him and was going to attach him without proof he even did the crime. She didn't insult Vamdemon and yet she belittles Davis. Unless Tai leaves Matt in the tender mercy of a butt ugly girl, Mimi with Sukamon, and Sora with Chuumon... Davis is certainly being bashed here.
By the way, sexual harassment in Japan is a foriegn concept. Kari would EXPECT to have a stranger grab her butt on a subway. It's part of life there. That Davis did that at a party would mean NOTHING.
Now if you don't want yaoi references, that's fine. But there's still the point of Kari going 'Gee, I had sex with my brother. Oh, well.' Which can work, but only if Tai is going nuts about the chance he may have knocked up his own sister.
As for Davis bashing. Placing him as main suspect when his sister is more likely to do it and Matt is more likely to have the means to do it does lessen the trust they show for him. Then they leave him to be screwed by Jun when he's pleading mercy. And Kari insulting him and was going to attach him without proof he even did the crime. She didn't insult Vamdemon and yet she belittles Davis. Unless Tai leaves Matt in the tender mercy of a butt ugly girl, Mimi with Sukamon, and Sora with Chuumon... Davis is certainly being bashed here.
By the way, sexual harassment in Japan is a foriegn concept. Kari would EXPECT to have a stranger grab her butt on a subway. It's part of life there. That Davis did that at a party would mean NOTHING.