09-10-2006, 12:45 PM
I skimmed through about half of it. From what I can tell, you really did little to no research for your characterization. Your characters are pretty much interchangeable.
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"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against