05-02-2007, 06:05 AM
That is a name that works for it. It really is nothing. And I'll be reading that when you post it.
It's a comfort to know his intentions are good
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05-02-2007, 06:05 AM
That is a name that works for it. It really is nothing. And I'll be reading that when you post it.
05-12-2007, 10:43 AM
Quote:It's your Alternate Ending series, Wise. I almost thought it might be new until the opportunist tried to kill the hedonist. Then I knew you were just recycling your old story. And then you follow into Death of Seasons: Shadow of the Sun. Certainly nothing new.I'm not just recycling. I'm compacting a story into a diamond with a brilliance the average reader will not be able to fathom. My uncle, an ex-publisher, read it, and he criticisized it for not giving characters names and for its sudden shifts in tone in certain areas, completely missing my poetic intentions. This is a replacement for my Death of Seasons: Shadow on the Sun Series (as well as my Alternate Ending Series). I was sick of writing a giant story when I really had only a handful of points to make. There's an ending you may or may not see coming. I'm submitting the story tonight. As soon as its posted, I will also paste the ending in here for comments. Let's see who "gets it." "I looked up and saw you; I know that you saw me. We froze but for a moment In empathy."-Rise Against
05-19-2007, 07:35 AM
10. The Isolationist
I made it to high school without telling my story to anyone. No one questioned why I didn "I looked up and saw you; I know that you saw me. We froze but for a moment In empathy."-Rise Against
05-24-2007, 03:34 PM
It's time for me to tell you again that you are really good at this. Really good. So this is the end then.
05-25-2007, 07:01 AM
Thank you. That means a lot, and I'm not being sarcastic. I may write another single if another contest comes up, but for the story that I always wanted to tell, this is the end.
"I looked up and saw you; I know that you saw me. We froze but for a moment In empathy."-Rise Against
05-26-2007, 02:45 PM
I know you're not. Because sarcasm is really hard to pull off on the internet. ha ha ha. But I'm just giving credit where it's due. You are good at this.
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