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A clear color with little squares in them? That's what I guess.
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Oh, so it was an accident?
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I meant her walking in on him but ok. Can't wait to see if you continue this.
I kind of like masaru and yoshino. They seem to be able to fit together and since tohma has his counterpart namami, I think she'd be a good sister to chika.
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Nicely done, I can't wait to see the rest of it...I think the no dialouge works well to this point, it's easy enough to understand without any words.
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Ooh, Masaru should walk in later and tell Ikuto that if he's a real man he should fuck Yoshino with all he's got.