12-13-2003, 04:52 PM
LP: Hey guys, after a good time without write a lemon (5 months actually) I finally managed to write a second lemon
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First Chapter of my new series
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12-14-2003, 11:57 PM
Hey, that really wasn't bad! :) It wasn't too short, had a lot of clear descriptions and was pretty believable. Rock on! ^^
12-18-2003, 11:03 PM
Very nice LP ^_^
I wonder who Veemon gets? hmmm oh and for a second couple I'd suggest Hawkbiyo since that could also work too 
12-19-2003, 04:11 AM
don't worry I'm thinking in a good couple for Veemon, but that is a surprise, and about the HawkBiyo, I already had thought in that couple too.
glad you liked the first chapter, is was worth delay five months in release it here 
12-27-2003, 06:38 AM
After all you are fair enough to give Veemon a girl too.
Nice work man. ^.^ Makes me feel to work on my non-hentai series and a few lemons I got to do ;) Keep it up, and give Veemon a nice girl, man ;)
12-27-2003, 01:49 PM
glad you like the lemon Tia, and don't worry Veemon's gonna get a good girl to love I just need to plan that lemon fine before releasing it so you can and everyone can enjoy it just like enjoyed this one that to tell the truth I'm really surprised that it got a good critic, that means that I improved :D
well see ya and keep going with your writing too 
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