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Yeah but it is not true for some people.
And that was good. And very clever/hurting. Especially the international rep. That really hurts.
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You know, on the second day, I've found some parts of this poem that need improvement. I'll make corrections and edit the post later. That's the thing about poetry: you can never get it right the first time.
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against
That's also the thing I hate about poetry, you can't write a decent one write before class or at least I can't.
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True but you're not a normal poet are you.
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Actually I use a journal cause, I have been always at ease with myself when I write anything regardless of what it is. I now use the labtop more but if Im ever in the "AH God, why me? Stupid Writer's Block" mode, it somehow helps me with the writing 10 fold. I know you are not fond of stream of counsciousness, but the journal, pen to paper is always best. I liked your poem by the way Wise...
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My appologies, and LOL on the lawn sprinkler XP.
Poem is soul, written to express, no matter whats written, it is a proclamation of what we individuals are put into words. Whether poorly written, or poet quality, it all needs to be written and read. Someone, out there regardless of what you say, will want to read your poetry...Im glad to have someone that is as talented of a word smith as any other.
Always look foward to seeing more wise...
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I'll check this out when I have time. I'm always running! *crashes against a light post and falls on her butt*
Ouch.