Dark Designs

[Gogglehead]

Here's my first attempt at a lemon. I tried to post it here but my e-mails didn't seem to be able to get to the guy in charge, my guess is they got caught in his spam filter.

But anyways just follow the link:


http://anime.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600000015

It part action part hentai. Feel free to leave any suggestions.

[Wisemon]

I read this before somewhere else. I can't say that I particularly like this story, but you do have potential as a writer.

If I felt the urge, I'd give it a more in depth review. That's not my job though. I'm just the site's biggest Frontier supporter, so I know a thing or two about Izumi's traits. Other than that, there's nothing to qualify me to help you out... unless I'm forgetting something.

[Gogglehead]

I had it on the DHZ before it shut down. I think I posted it on Mediaminer.org too.

[Lordalmar]

I had it on the DHZ before it shut down. I think I posted it on Mediaminer.org too.

it hasn't shut down. ya can still go there, it hasn't been updated for awhile though.

[Gogglehead]

Well they said they were shutting down anyways...

For those that care I just uploaded chapter 3 there.

BTW is their a place to get BETAs or anything here?