Failed attempts at living simple lives are what keep me coming back to you

[blueeyedgabulvo0o]

Just a few points of voice cracks and a long note before hitting the second verse that I thought of should be read.

Damn, I thought I had rid myself of the voice cracks *sigh*.

The best approach to the song should be like "King for a Day" by Greenday to be honest.

I’m struggling just to learn two keys on a piano. Brass instruments are out of the question (I know the song).

I was actually complimenting you cause your voice cracked only once. And as for the instruments. Use like FL studio to create tracks for your song. It may provide to be useful in your struggle.

[Wisemon]

Not my favorite, but this is probably the most powerful thing I've ever recorded:

Mari Lyn (Vocal Edit) - Benjamin Wiseman