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#21
And now, let's evaluate the WHOLE series according to your total scoring.

Chapter 1: 6.4
Chapter 2: 5.75
Chapter 3: 5.25
Chapter 4: 8
Chapter 5: 8.5
Chapter 6: 8.5
Chapter 7: 6.25
Chapter 8: 8 (coincidence?)

Series' Plot: I say your conceptualization of the end day is actually impressive in terms of own thinking, this is how I'd picture the end of humanity too. I always thought that demons wouldn't be the ones punishing us, but God himself would be. But well... I also think that if that happens, then at least ONE human will be able to stop that, don't ask me why, I'm as stubborn as that human would be.

Series' Quality: I think this is a very good story in terms of descriptions and the narration. Errors, yes, lots, but nothing that can't be easily fixed. I enjoyed reading this.

Series' "Hot-ness": Something that could be improved a lot, and I'm serious, you know, even though the story doesn't center on sex, you add it here, so you should work it to be better. Many improvisations can be made with enough imagination, you just go on trying, it'll be no long until you finally come up with nice things to add.

Last Note: I strongly reccomend this to any people who likes gore and rape.

Series' Final Score: 7.5 (Seven dot five)

Own Words: Good Job *thumb up* You have lots of potential, keep besting yourself!
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#22
Yay, thank you. :D
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