05-09-2006, 09:00 AM
I said it before when you asked me what I geninely thought of it and tried to edit it as best I could that It was well written. I enjoyed a lot of the simplier things with the inner narraration and as well as the characters chosen. Senjuro, it was very good and if I could help you out once I again, I would be happy....or better yet, honored to do so.....