05-08-2006, 03:38 PM
I readed it all! I loved it Sen! The sex scene was so descriptive... it was exceptional. The characters were IC all the way! Not to mention this was an excellent plot!
I only saw 2-3 mistakes of tenses (same as I often have), but it WAS JUST GREAT!
I can't give a 10 because it isn't perfect YET, but if I had to grade it... from the start till the end... I'd give you a 9.6
In other words, I loved it senjuro. Good work.
I only saw 2-3 mistakes of tenses (same as I often have), but it WAS JUST GREAT!
I can't give a 10 because it isn't perfect YET, but if I had to grade it... from the start till the end... I'd give you a 9.6
In other words, I loved it senjuro. Good work.