This art is out of reach

[Wisemon]

I was going to post this in Original Fiction, but it's not really fiction. To those who have been posting poems recently, allow me to mention that I am a published poet (see "Closer to the Stars" thread). The reason I don't post more poems here is because technically this counts as publication, and magazines want to have first time publication rights. So, I've managed to find a song/poem not good enough for publishing, but good enough to use as an example of rhythm consistency and extended metaphor.



[color=black]Amusement Park

Thumbs are on the buttons, and I

[DarkBlue]

Bravo! Now THAT is a poem.

[UnknownH]

Wow, that's obvisously your poem. It's either sarcastic or pesimistic. Or even saddly/bitterly realistic. Nice work.

[Wisemon]

Wow, that's obviously your poem. It's either sarcastic or pessimistic, or even sadly/bitterly realistic.

Exactly the reaction I go for on most of my poems.

[Gunter VanCrimson]

Yeah, exactly what you desserve. (More, actually.)

[UnknownH]

Who deserves it?

[Gunter VanCrimson]

...you know- I don't remember.