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This art is out of reach - Wisemon - 04-01-2006
I was going to post this in Original Fiction, but it's not really fiction. To those who have been posting poems recently, allow me to mention that I am a published poet (see "Closer to the Stars" thread). The reason I don't post more poems here is because technically this counts as publication, and magazines want to have first time publication rights. So, I've managed to find a song/poem not good enough for publishing, but good enough to use as an example of rhythm consistency and extended metaphor.
[color=black]Amusement Park
Thumbs are on the buttons, and I
- DarkBlue - 04-01-2006
Bravo! Now THAT is a poem.
- UnknownH - 04-02-2006
Wow, that's obvisously your poem. It's either sarcastic or pesimistic. Or even saddly/bitterly realistic. Nice work.
- Wisemon - 04-02-2006
Quote:Wow, that's obviously your poem. It's either sarcastic or pessimistic, or even sadly/bitterly realistic.Exactly the reaction I go for on most of my poems.
- Gunter VanCrimson - 04-03-2006
Yeah, exactly what you desserve. (More, actually.)
- UnknownH - 04-04-2006
Who deserves it?
- Gunter VanCrimson - 04-04-2006
...you know- I don't remember.