A little taste of what may be to come... (Updated Pic)

[Nate Hunter]

Hikari? I actually drew a reasonably presentable fan-art? Yeah, yeah, let's not get too excited.



For those who can't see it, http://khalpha.fu8.com/hentai/lostlight-Karicover.JPG. THIS IS THE ORIGINAL VERSION ONLY.

The Updated version (seen above) is at http://khalpha.fu8.com/hentai/lostlight-Karicover3.jpg.

Will this picture lead to a doujinshi of Lost Light, or will it simply become a testament to my attempted diversification of skills? And please be honest, tell me what I did wrong if you can see it -- I need to know what's wrong or I can't become better.

I welcome all feedback. And no, that logo isn't quite right yet, but I'm working on it.

[FinalEnix]

cool pic :D

[Red Mage Dragon Tiamat]

looks promising so far. ^^

[Ebolavirus]

looking good man.
a possible doujinshi of my favorite series???? aaaaaaaaaaaahhhh.
say dont wanna bug you but are you working on a new chapter to lost light?

Im getting worried that you arnt going to keep writing in thatt series!

[Nate Hunter]

I can only write the series when it's moving, which right now, it is. I'm about 1/4 of the way through the actual Chapter 4 right now, and will be putting it up as soon as it's finished. Anyhow, I'm in a hurry now, so enjoy the pic as a view of what may be to come. Later!

[UnknownH]

not that bad

[Outlaw Torn44]

Okay, going to tell ya the nice and low points of this pic.

First off your sketch looks pretty clean so far, but Kari's chin is a bit wide, so are her calves. Her breasts look small and believeable for someone her age but they look a bit too much like how Boss Reo would do them, almost stenciled looking.

The bright parts are its a original pose and the posture of the char is fitting and delightful. I think once you see this colored correctly you'll be spurred to draw at least a small doujinshi based on it.

[Grave]

404 for me.

[FinalEnix]

cant wait till it is ready

[Red Mage Dragon Tiamat]

just try it again. normally the pic should work