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Hikari? I actually drew a reasonably presentable fan-art? Yeah, yeah, let's not get too excited.



For those who can't see it, http://khalpha.fu8.com/hentai/lostlight-Karicover.JPG. THIS IS THE ORIGINAL VERSION ONLY.

The Updated version (seen above) is at http://khalpha.fu8.com/hentai/lostlight-Karicover3.jpg.

Will this picture lead to a doujinshi of Lost Light, or will it simply become a testament to my attempted diversification of skills? And please be honest, tell me what I did wrong if you can see it -- I need to know what's wrong or I can't become better.

I welcome all feedback. And no, that logo isn't quite right yet, but I'm working on it.

cool pic :D

looks promising so far. ^^

looking good man.
a possible doujinshi of my favorite series???? aaaaaaaaaaaahhhh.
say dont wanna bug you but are you working on a new chapter to lost light?

Im getting worried that you arnt going to keep writing in thatt series!

I can only write the series when it's moving, which right now, it is. I'm about 1/4 of the way through the actual Chapter 4 right now, and will be putting it up as soon as it's finished. Anyhow, I'm in a hurry now, so enjoy the pic as a view of what may be to come. Later!

not that bad

Okay, going to tell ya the nice and low points of this pic.

First off your sketch looks pretty clean so far, but Kari's chin is a bit wide, so are her calves. Her breasts look small and believeable for someone her age but they look a bit too much like how Boss Reo would do them, almost stenciled looking.

The bright parts are its a original pose and the posture of the char is fitting and delightful. I think once you see this colored correctly you'll be spurred to draw at least a small doujinshi based on it.

404 for me.

cant wait till it is ready

just try it again. normally the pic should work