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I don't care if that's your "nature," Wisemon. You don't need to be a jackass.
My opinion? Creepy, yes. Amazing, yes. It may be freaky, but I still find it awesome! I wish I could do stuff like that, heh, I've already got many cool ideas!
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Well it was for a class in school so we had really no say in what we do in it. I will make another today and post it later, since there will be nothing to do...
HAPPY VALENTINES DAY EVERYONE! :D
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The only thing I can really say is that the thing at the top right looks like an eye ball.
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Ahem.....talking professionaly.....
It is visually striking and I like it, but I have to agree with Wise that its technique sucks. To be more specific than him and to avoid wandering into smaller details, take a look at everything's lighting, and you'll realize nothing makes any sense.
Tree: one lighting angle. Strong.
Clouds: another angle. Strong but not so much.
Moon/planet: another. Lighter.
Background: another. Dark.
"Eyeball": another. Faint lighting.
I think...if you take away the eyeball, it will look a lot better. The eye is the most out of place element in the pic. It doesn't match any other element. The tree and clouds sort of match, the background kind of too, the moon not much but it could pass, but the eyeball......
Well, it's just your first try, so don't be disappointed. A good artist needs lots of practice. Keep trying, and you'll get better.
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I never said I was a professional :-p I will be uploading a new pic later.
I know the lighting doesn't work and I don't really care, it is a modern abstract piece it isn't supposed to be uniform lol Ah well, I will post another soon 8)
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Roran for a first attempt this is rather interesting, I can tell its your first, and you will get better in time. Its rather cool but I agree and disagree with Zephyr. Certain aspects throw it off, but I can understand if this picture's intention is supposed to have an eerie flow then it creates it point visually. You will get better with time but its an Ok piece all together, room for improvement.
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Zephyr was constructive.
You were a jackass.
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its a fricking PICTURE!! who cares whether its "expert" or not! >_< if he wants to call it "surreal" that doesnt mean it HAS to be "surreal". jeez its a picture.... :?
my point is, its HIS picture, he can do whatever the f*ck he wants to and call it whatever the f*ck he wants to. rant over.
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Not a bad first attempt, a bit weird but I like it, reminds me of a dream I had.