11-18-2008, 04:03 AM
(This post was last modified: 11-18-2008, 04:05 AM by Chaotic Phoenix.)
(11-14-2008 02:04 PM)Kundral Wrote: It is actually the rough, and I mean rough, plot to the first story. The series, please dont correct me as I am starting to get anyoed by that, plot is still under construction with the first story already started.
*raises hand* Can I say something <.< >.> ^^ Thanks, lol.
I was just wanting to say that corrections are supposed to help you learn how to improve, not to annoy, so that you don't make too many mistakes and have whoever is reading your story to stop reading halfway only because the writer is using bad grammar in his words. However, I agree with DMX. The plot is good, but the title doesn't match it. Maybe something like... Taking out the Garbagemon or something along with what the plot of the story is.
Nyaa... Will be around but not very much.
