04-01-2006, 03:56 AM
Are you sure that was for Unknown and not your dog? It's a nice poem, but I think Unknown might prefer something with a bit more levity and a bit less homosexuality and death. I write poems in my free time; maybe I'll post something funny in the original fiction section.
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against