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I had nothing to do- So I wrote a poem-Dedicated to UnknownH - Gunter VanCrimson - 03-31-2006
[i]The Savior
By: Me
Dedicated to: Mr. UnknownH
The day ends, and darkness falls in the wings of night,
A delicate feather floats down from an Angel
- rorancrystalwolf - 03-31-2006
Holy crap ! I love that! that I have to print out and put up on my wall with all credit to you! wow that was really good! you have a talent my friend be proud!
- Shadowknight - 03-31-2006
:shock: *Speechless*
- Wisemon - 04-01-2006
Are you sure that was for Unknown and not your dog? It's a nice poem, but I think Unknown might prefer something with a bit more levity and a bit less homosexuality and death. I write poems in my free time; maybe I'll post something funny in the original fiction section.
- UnknownH - 04-01-2006
I do find it a little dark and gothy but it's the thought that counts.
Uh... Thanks. I'm really not a poem person but I do have a friend who is.
So don't take what wise said too hard.
- blueeyedgabulvo0o - 04-01-2006
Feels like a good poem but made for like Romeo and Juliet more than anything. Atleast I know that if I had recieved anything that I would be more than happy. At least you try to put into words some feelings toward such a great friend..... Maybe I should give it a go.... I have several I wrote and all of them are really well worded so says all the professors that have read it
GUNter! sowwy this is your thunder and I'll remember that you made an attempt that will never be forgot.....
I hope that whatever you that you don't stop your love because its passion that drives you and its love of what you do that completes it...
~~
lonelygabu~~
~~
- Shadowknight - 04-01-2006
Just because it's dedicated to him doesn't mean it has to be about him. Like when authors write books about wierd fantasy stuff and dedicate it to their parents. It's sign of great respect and admiration to dedicate any form of writing to someone.
- UnknownH - 04-01-2006
Yeah, I apreciated it, but it is alittle weird.
- Shadowknight - 04-01-2006
Yeah but we love Gun for his wierdness so I love this poem too.
Shadow's brain: That sounded like logic.
Shadow: Did not! Now go away before I get the beerzooka.
Shadow's brain:.....
- DarkBlue - 04-01-2006
....
Dark and Gothy- that's Gunter all right-
I didn't even know you DO poems-
I thought you had a phobia for rhymes? (nursery rhyme incident. top secret.)
It's... WEIRD...
It's... as Wisemon said... "homosexual"?