05-26-2006, 09:58 AM
Slipknot, you say? That might explain why your story isn't as violent as you think it is. These are my two most violent stories:
http://digiartistsdomain.org/lemons/wise...semon3.htm
http://digiartistsdomain.org/lemons/wise...emon18.htm
The second one (the better one) is inspired by Metallica. See, you need complex and violent melodies, not just violent lyrics.
http://digiartistsdomain.org/lemons/wise...semon3.htm
http://digiartistsdomain.org/lemons/wise...emon18.htm
The second one (the better one) is inspired by Metallica. See, you need complex and violent melodies, not just violent lyrics.
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against