10-31-2005, 05:22 AM
You really didn't set yourself up too well for bringing him in. Milleniummon comes due to a gap in something or other, according to Ken. I'm also a little confused about exactly why everybody has to go to Mt. Infinity. You might want to consider re-writing your previous chapters to better set up your next one. Besides, re-writing is a good exercise when you have writer's block.
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against