OK, so I'm actually onto writing the next chapter of Revival. I know what I want to happen. I just don't know what to do.
There has to be some decently dramatic way to show 3 pairs of people raping each other, an Evil God rising and said Evil God confronting the kids who're on there way to kill him!
Yes, it's a lemon, remember? The 3 pairs thing is to power Milleniumon with pain, kind of like the D-Reaper but more intense.
Quote:There has to be some decently dramatic way to show 3 pairs of people raping each other, an Evil God rising and said Evil God confronting the kids who're on there way to kill him!
If you want to make the rapes "dramatic," my advice would be to not do them sequentially. They would lose their effectiveness one after the other. Figure out a way to do them simultaneously (though not necessarily all in the same place). Not that I approve of rape, but I'm guessing this is symbolic of something.
It's Milleniumon harvesting the pain and grief of all involved. I figure he's that kind of sadistic SOB.
Actually, I want to do only one real rape scene: Wormmon on Biyomon, both trying to attack or rape each other. The point is that Milleniumon is making them do it all, but they're still concious and can feel. Also, with Biyo/Worm I get a nice predator/prey metaphor.
The main problem is transitioning into the main confrontation of Chosen v the Big M. I just can't figure out a good way to write that.
You really didn't set yourself up too well for bringing him in. Milleniummon comes due to a gap in something or other, according to Ken. I'm also a little confused about exactly why everybody has to go to Mt. Infinity. You might want to consider re-writing your previous chapters to better set up your next one. Besides, re-writing is a good exercise when you have writer's block.
Damn it I hate my stupid evolving writing skills. By the time I get good enough to write something, I've already written it.
I may just move straight to the storyline that I actually want, but I'm a continuity freak like that.
Milleniumon shows up by de-Jogressing from Cyberdramon and hijacking a dimensional portal thing.
Wait, that's it! I'll be a lazy-ass and save the end of this series for storyline revelations in the real story! Brilliant!