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(12-16-2009 08:44 AM)Guilmon and a shotgun Wrote: Seems a little cliche, to have a person of some importance and uniqueness as the main antagonist...also, whats the dilemma/plot of the story? What does Mr Willis do that will make me, the reader, want to read on?

Dude. Its a work-in-progress set-up. Willis is the protagonist--not the antagonist. I have jotted down various notes for an idea, though, its not 100% complete.
Though, I do plan to have an A/I in this story.

A/I=Author Insert.
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check out my idea - by grandphoenix1 - 12-15-2009, 10:13 AM
RE: check out my idea - by Guilmon and a shotgun - 12-16-2009, 08:44 AM
RE: check out my idea - by grandphoenix1 - 12-16-2009, 10:16 AM
RE: check out my idea - by Guilmon and a shotgun - 12-17-2009, 09:21 AM
RE: check out my idea - by grandphoenix1 - 12-17-2009, 10:14 AM
RE: check out my idea - by Yumi - 12-18-2009, 11:35 PM