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check out my idea - grandphoenix1 - 12-15-2009
I've an idea that came to me today. This is how it goes; Willis, who just wants to put his "past" behind from the events after the Digimon film. He can finally his past behind him and forget about Diaboromon once and for all, or can he.
The story opens up with Willis, who just been accepted into the University of Texas-the youngest person to do so("gifted mind"). He meet a variety of people, though he steers clear of the "extreme side" of college life: drugs, sex, ultra-partying. Though, he finds friends, mostly just engineering majors, and also his digimon, which he stills has around. Though, he still feels at time, the guilt of the Diaboromon incident, the thought of it still in his mind.
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This is what I have so far, I know its not much, but its what I have jottted it down today. Anyone wish to give their input on it, feel free to do so.
RE: check out my idea - Guilmon and a shotgun - 12-16-2009
Seems a little cliche, to have a person of some importance and uniqueness as the main antagonist...also, whats the dilemma/plot of the story? What does Mr Willis do that will make me, the reader, want to read on?
RE: check out my idea - grandphoenix1 - 12-16-2009
(12-16-2009, 08:44 AM)Guilmon and a shotgun Wrote: Seems a little cliche, to have a person of some importance and uniqueness as the main antagonist...also, whats the dilemma/plot of the story? What does Mr Willis do that will make me, the reader, want to read on?
Dude. Its a work-in-progress set-up. Willis is the protagonist--not the antagonist. I have jotted down various notes for an idea, though, its not 100% complete.
Though, I do plan to have an A/I in this story.
A/I=Author Insert.
RE: check out my idea - Guilmon and a shotgun - 12-17-2009
even still, it would've been worthwhile jotting down a plot, setting and a couple of characters before making it public...do you plan on developing this story fully?
RE: check out my idea - grandphoenix1 - 12-17-2009
Yes I do. It was just mentioning it here as a discussion here.
RE: check out my idea - Yumi - 12-18-2009
(12-17-2009, 10:14 AM)grandphoenix1 Wrote: Yes I do. It was just mentioning it here as a discussion here.
I have an idea for a story but I don't know if its good enough to use in a propper story.:-/
(12-17-2009, 10:14 AM)grandphoenix1 Wrote: Yes I do. It was just mentioning it here as a discussion here.
Hey, i have an idea does anyone want to read it just to see if its good?
(12-17-2009, 10:14 AM)grandphoenix1 Wrote: Yes I do. It was just mentioning it here as a discussion here.
Hey, i have an idea does anyone want to read it just to see if its good?