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The title and the plot have nothing to do, to start with. Gatomon doesn't die, and she isn't even curious, just horny. Your plot doesn't look like bad though, with a nice title change it might just work.

Also, about what I'd like to see if you write it, try using, first of all, a good spell checker, maybe a beta reader. Second, work on your grammar, it hurts my eyes.
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Plot inspiration - by Kundral - 11-14-2008, 08:58 AM
RE: Plot inspiration - by DragonMasterX - 11-14-2008, 09:27 AM
RE: Plot inspiration - by Kundral - 11-14-2008, 09:30 AM
RE: Plot inspiration - by DragonMasterX - 11-14-2008, 09:33 AM
RE: Plot inspiration - by Kundral - 11-14-2008, 12:20 PM
RE: Plot inspiration - by DragonMasterX - 11-14-2008, 01:35 PM
RE: Plot inspiration - by Kundral - 11-14-2008, 02:04 PM
RE: Plot inspiration - by Chaotic Phoenix - 11-18-2008, 04:03 AM