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RE: Asesino's Commentaries - UnknownH - 04-01-2011
Similar to something else, Good, Funny Commentary on something really is a art. You may never reach MST/Rifftrax level good but you might can get Good Level Abridged good. Like Yugioh Abridged or Team 4-Star.
I suggest you practice on a bad movie. Like; The Room. On Adult Swim Tonight at 12:30. Or 3 am. It is truly horrible and is perfect for this.
(Warning, ugly man ass in the first 15-30 minutes.)
RE: Asesino's Commentaries - Asesino - 04-11-2012
Let's try this shit again, shall we?
I'm actually going to put a few rules in place this time around:
1. The stories have to be long. Long enough that I'm going to want to kill you before, during, and after I'm finished.
2. No overly-long paragraphs. One or two large paragraphs is fine, but if the entire story consists of 5+ lines in a single paragraph (on the wide-screen forum, that is), it's hard to comment on.
3. There has to be some plot to the story. Sex is fine, just give me something else to latch onto.
4. Avoid Xros Wars stuff. I know nothing about it, so it's like Muhammad Ali commentating on a Starcraft tournament; awesome, if pointless.
5. There is no fifth rule.
6. I am now deliberately wasting your time.
RE: Asesino's Commentaries - CloneWarrior - 04-11-2012
Would you do a Drake and Josh story?
RE: Asesino's Commentaries - Asesino - 04-13-2012
Not so long that I want to hang you by your entrails, unfortunately. Or fortunately, I guess.
RE: Asesino's Commentaries - DragonMasterX - 04-13-2012
Only digimon? ;o
RE: Asesino's Commentaries - BlackVeedramon - 04-13-2012
Rule 4 sucks, you have commented Xros Wars fics before, we like you being blatant ignorant about it, please erase that rule.
RE: Asesino's Commentaries - Asesino - 04-13-2012
(04-13-2012, 12:13 PM)DragonMasterX Wrote: Only digimon? ;o
Doesn't have to be, no.
(04-13-2012, 03:44 PM)BlackVeedramon Wrote: Rule 4 sucks, you have commented Xros Wars fics before, we like you being blatant ignorant about it, please erase that rule.
I realize that I've done them before, but I felt they were probably the worst ones I did (commentary-wise, not story-wise).
RE: Asesino's Commentaries - Takatofan1986 - 04-13-2012
I'm really tempted to link you to an awful awful lemon I did 7 years ago, for fun, but I dunno with your commentaries if id take it in fun or not XD. I have newer better fics, but they are all multi chap.
RE: Asesino's Commentaries - Asesino - 04-13-2012
(04-13-2012, 10:07 PM)Takatofan1986 Wrote: I'm really tempted to link you to an awful awful lemon I did 7 years ago, for fun, but I dunno with your commentaries if id take it in fun or not XD. I have newer better fics, but they are all multi chap.
If it makes you feel any better, I avoid making fun of spelling or grammatical errors, and I wrote a disclaimer at the beginning that everything I say in the commentaries are just jokes. I try to focus on the story as if it were a movie.
RE: Asesino's Commentaries - Takatofan1986 - 04-14-2012
In that case... the really bad lemon XD
http://www.digiartistsdomain.org/lemons/takatofan1986/Left.htm
Edit: I should probably mention its Yaoi...