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For anybody that was following my topic in The Den of Inspiration, I said I wanted to take someone's story, and add my own commentary into it in a comical fashion. While the comical fashion thing may or may not apply to you, I have at least finished the commentary for the two stories I was given the green light to comment on.

Anyway, I'm posting these here because I think the den of inspiration is more for ideas, rather than finished products.

DISCLAIMER: The stories here were not written by me, but rather by their respective authors. Also keep in mind that anything mean I say, I obviously say in jest.



No Debt goes Unrepaid, by DragonMasterX.

Unrepaid?


“That was incredible, Ryo!” Kenta cheered.

What? The sex is over already? Huh, that was quick.

“Never thought the legendary Tamer would come to our rescue, heh!” Kazu added with a thumb up.

And it was a threesome too, damn.

“Megadramon wasn’t an easy opponent, I’m just glad Cyberdramon and I made it in time to fight him back” Ryo smiled as he looked up at his non-expressive digimon partner. Kenta and Kazu seemed all but swayed.

No, wait, nevermind.

“He’s so modest!” one grinned, “And cool!” the other complimented. Rika was walking with them with Renamon by her side, her usually quiet demeanor starting to shift as Kazu’s and Kenta’s overwhelming suck-up-to talk began to grow weary on her.

I.. I don't remember any of these characters or what happened in the show. As long as it sticks with Renamon, I'll be fine.

“Would you two shut up already? You’re sounding like a pair of hyped-up high-school girls drooling over a senior! As if he was so great, hmph.” Rika lifted her chin up and shut her eyes, walking ahead of the three guys, her pride obviously hurt.

Close eyes, can't see obstacles, trip, face-plant.

It had been a tough battle indeed. That place full of didn’t seem so hazardous, but just by having removed a tiny piece of clockwork they had released a frighteningly powerful opponent. Kyuubimon had failed to contain the hostile Megadramon, but fortunately (and much to Rika’s dismay) Ryo had appeared to save the day with his own frighteningly powerful digimon partner. She cringed at the thought that her rival could already have his digimon digivolve to Ultimate without any catalyst such as the Blue Card Calumon provided her, Takato and Henry.

EXPOSITION!

“What’s up with her?” Kenta and Kazu blinked, Ryo mellowing as he watched Rika storm off into the hut they had been heading to.

"She had her eyes shut and walked into a cactus."

“She probably needs some time alone. Renamon was nearly killed in that fight,” Ryo said with his hands resting on his flanks, “I’d say she’s pretty much pissed it was me who saved her though, haha,” he rubbed behind his head and continued walking after Rika and Renamon with Cybedramon following closely behind.

Kazu and Kenta exchanged looks and blinks, suddenly burst into hyperactivity again and yelped: “He’s so awesome!”

Apparently saying words can excite these two.

After the group had entered the house Babamon and Jijimon so generously were sharing, the day slipped by in a rather uneventful manner. Rika had treated Renamon’s wounds with some of the medicine in the shack and Ryo managed to somehow convince Cyberdramon to lie down and rest to recover his energy after the tough battle from before. There was no reason to rush after all, they were all tired of trekking and exploring the Digital World, this was their chance to relax.

Okay, Renamon's wounds are healed. There's absolutely NO REASON why she shouldn't take part in the eventual orgy, right?

After dinner, Kazu and Kenta grouped on either of Ryo’s sides and gingerly jumped up and down, “Hey, Ryo! We know of a great onsen nearby, we’re gonna go in for a dip, c’mon!” Kazu invited with Kenta happily nodding for emphasis on the onsen’s greatness.

"I've got a better idea: let's all piss off. You two go first."

Ryo politely declined, “Maybe later, I’ve to help Babamon with the dishes. Jijimon seems to have fallen asleep after filling his belly,” the boy gently laughed, not waiting for any confirmation as he walked off into the kitchen.

"HE'S SO AWESOME!"

Kenta and Kazu shrugged, with Kazu saying: “Well, his loss. I’m spent for the day, all I wanna do is relax!”

“Relax from what? You two didn’t do anything,” Rika said from the table, her arms folded together.

"That's not true, we were creepy and annoying!"

“Aw, c’mon Rika. Just because you were the one protecting us earlier and that you helped Babamon make dinner while we played cards with Ryo doesn’t mean we didn’t do anything productive!” Kazu said in their defense, nudging Kenta with a smirk, “Show ‘er, Kenta!”

Kenta smirked in the same condescending way and showed Rika’s eyebrow-lifted eyes a piece of paper signed with what appeared to be a cartoonish doodle of Ryo and his signature beside it, “We got his autograph!”

"He's so AWESOME! Did you hear him use words earlier?"

Rika’s eyebrow twitched, a vein popping behind her head, “You were pestering him all this time for a piece of paper?” she groaned.

Veins popping up over your head and giant sweat beads must happen exclusively to Japanese people.

“Oh yeah! We’ve the autograph of the Legendary Tamer, hehe,” Kazu grinned, “Isn’t that great?”

“Go to your onsen, you stalkers,” she coldly said, turning her back on them as she went to sit on one of the cushions by the fireplace. Kenta groaned.

“Why does she have to be so bitchy?” Kazu shrugged and turned to walk in the onsen’s direction.

“I dunno, bet all she needs is a good fuck.”

"And what are the chances of sex happening in the near future? Like, none!"

“Try lowering your voice when you want to talk behind a person’s back,” said Rika from her sitting place, making both boys stand straighter than usual and then rush off with blush on their faces.

Rika scoffed as she settled down to meditate “Jerks.”

"Pfft. All I need is a good fuck? Yeah, like that will happen in the next five minutes.

Several minutes later, a voice woke Rika from her thoughts. “Hey, are you okay?"

"Yeah, I'm fine with the exception of apparently needing a good fuck, that of which I find unlikely to occur."

Rika turned to see Ryo standing beneath her, “You don’t need to check up on me. I can do by without you running around,” she coldly said, causing Ryo to let out a small chuckle.

Beneath her? Is he standing IN the fire?

“C’mon, don’t play the Ice Queen routine with me, Rika,” he said, “Plus you haven’t been very welcome to me ever since I showed up. Weren’t you at least concerned where I had vanished to? Bet you didn’t expect me to be here and with Cyberdramon on top of it! You’re still the hard-to-impress girl, huh?”

“Humph, and you’re still the easy-going nut job” Rika retorted, not even looking at him this time.

"At least I didn't walk into a cactus."

“Nut job? Wow, I went from a jerk face to a nut job in the span of a month. Score,” Ryo grinned in a playful, sarcastic manner, making Rika cringe.

She violently stood up and faced the smiling boy “Stop trying to hit on me, I still haven’t forgotten,”

“I haven’t, either” Ryo smirked in a condescending fashion all of a sudden, making Rika take a step back as he saw him grin to her.

His awesomeness finally hit her.

“What do you mean?” Rika blushed, trying to play the quiet fool without realizing that in her outburst she had already laid her hand of cards open to him. Ryo just took steps in her direction until she was backed up against the wall; they fully knew what he was talking about. She had been about to call him out on how he had obviously cheated when he beat her in the Digimon Card Battle tournament back in the real world, but Ryo had brought back a memory of something highly unpleasant she had been trying to block out in her head until then.

The highly unpleasant memory in question is, naturally, losing at a children's card game.

“You know what I mean, Rika” Ryo chuckled darkly, “That day, we placed a bet. You won, I became your underling side-kick. I won, you gave me a blow job. Things happened all of a sudden and I had to leave as you know, but…” he briefly stopped, pressing the tip of his tongue at the rim of his upper lip, “…I’m expecting you to pay your debt to me in full, tonight if possible.”

What? How could that possibly seem like a good bet to take?

“That smug little…!” Rika cursed him in her mind, but he was right. That was a debt she had long left unpaid; sure it had been beyond her power to fulfill at the time but…

You mean UNrepaid.

Ryo’s arrogant stare seemed to be breaking Rika’s will apart bit by bit, but she wouldn’t let him have the satisfaction of seeing her fall to pieces. “Fine,” she said, sparking Ryo’s curiosity as his smile widened. Even then, she had wanted to punch him in the face to rub it off.

Seriously though, he becomes your side-kick if you win, and you have to BLOW HIM if you lose? That would be a shitty bet to take even IF the outcome of the contest couldn't easily go in your opponent's favour by simply shuffling your deck of cards wrong.

“Good girl!” Ryo smirked, walking back a few steps as he undid his pants, letting them fall down along with his briefs at the same time, a rock hard six incher facing Rika, who was more than surprised to say the least. She turned on her way and then knelt in front of him, observing his rock-hard cock with a small and nervous gulp.

“Y-you’re hard already?”

How did he manage to let his pants and briefs drop to the ground while having a rock hard erection? I bet he could also pull DOWNWARDS to get his coat off a rack.

“I had some time to think about coming to collect my debt while washing the dishes, and I knew Kenta and Kazu would be busy,” Ryo admitted, his right hand gripped around the base of his cock and nut sack, “So, gonna start tonight?” he chuckled. Rika huffed in return.

“Shut up or I can’t guarantee I won’t bite,” she snarled as she blushed harder and got down to her knees, her face next to the young man’s cock.

"If there was only a six-foot ass-kicking digital creature that would do anything I say in the next room to save me! But alas, that seems like an even bigger pipe-dream than ME receiving a good fuck at this point."

“You’re all love, Rika,” Ryo softly said, looking down at her as his fists clenched when her hand delicately caressed the base of his erection and then gripped it firmly to keep it from throbbing. This elicited a moan from Ryo, whose cheeks began flushing, but he said nothing in order to keep Rika happy and cooperative. He knew she was all but reluctant about this.

“Little Casanova-wannabe, piece of…” Rika murmured. Her eyes scanned over his maleness, never having really touched one before, but having read enough adult-themed manga to know where to start. This wasn’t sex, she was just going to suck him off and then she’d spit it back on his shirt. The young girl stroked Ryo’s manhood to get used to its shape and length, not getting second thoughts on what she was about to do. After all, they had placed a fair bet, and despite her childish accusations she knew it had been an official, fair-‘n-square tournament finals match. Which he had won.

"I couldn't have predicted in a million years that this bet could possibly come back to bite me in the ass!"

She cringed and clenched her teeth as she heard him moan in delight at her soft touch, her hand gripping hard again before she edged her face forwards and lightly kissed the tip of Ryo’s dick for taste. Rika groaned in her mind as she lightly sucked on the tip in a precocious manner, not having a lot of field experience. Ryo’s nerves happily took the ripples of pleasure that action produced, however. He moaned louder although he tried to contain them so he wouldn’t make a lot of noise. Rika was being a tease even if she wasn’t fully aware of it herself.

Oh yeah, you GOTTA taste 'em first. Savor the flavor, mm-mmm.

“Doesn’t taste that bad, I thought it’d be ugly…” Rika briefly stopped to collect her thoughts, inspecting Ryo’s glans wet with her saliva and decided she’d go ahead with it; the sooner it was over the quicker she’d get to kick his ass. The female digimon tamer proceeded with the treatment, her mouth shaking a bit before opening around Ryo’s relatively big penis, taking about three inches of the length into her mouth before she enclosed her lips around the veiny shaft.

She thought it was going to taste "Ugly"? What, is she from the southern United States now?

Ryo gasped and Rika began breathing through her nose in a focused fashion as she began sucking inwards, pulling an additional inch of Ryo’s cock inside of her mouth to the point her lips bumped on the side of her index finger of the hand she was using to hold a grip on the base of his pecker.

Can you suck any other direction than inwards? Oh wait, wrong inwards. Nevermind.

Ryo’s moans began to pick up some volume as Rika tried her best to suck and use her tongue at the same time as she had ‘learned’ to, finding that it pleasured the boy to the same level if not higher than what erotic comic books could ever depict. She felt her free hand go to his leg, resting on it so she could lean on him for better positioning, Ryo hardly budging since she wasn’t very heavy or strong to start with.

This just strengthens my theory: All Japanese teenagers read erotic comic books.

“Ahh, you’ve- done this before?” Ryo half-laughed half-moaned, Rika blushing harder as she muffledly insulted him with a frown as she glared up at his lustful eyes. Who did he think he was, accusing her of anything as derogatory as this? She was about to go with her word and bite him, but she somehow couldn’t bring herself to. Instead, she kept sucking and licking Ryo’s length in an even more feverish manner. Was she liking this? No, that was impossible. Ryo was a stupid boy, he had humiliated her, and now he was going for the coup‘d grace with this. Yet somehow, Rika found herself indulging him and at the same time, her own lust.

Is it too late for Renamon to join in?

It became clear to her that this wasn’t any sort of attraction she was feeling for her fellow digimon tamer and rival, not of the sentimental type at least. Her blush intensified, but her glare softened as she realized this, her eyes narrowing into a more relaxed state as she went to work on Ryo better and faster, her tongue happily accepting his small but continuous spurts of pre.

“I’m tellin’ ya, Kenta, there’s no way in heck Ryo would trade a noob like you a Black Imperialdramon Card; if anything, he’ll just allow you to show him your MarineAngemon Card, but that’s, mmph!”

"Quiet! Now, if you tell anybody about what happened back there, so help me I will cut you."

“Shh! Look!” Kenta interrupted, taking his palm off Kazu’s mouth. Kazu looked from the hall of the door to the living room where they had been planning to go through and widened his eyes to the same proportions as Kenta’s surprised ones. Was this some sort of shared-dream they were experiencing?

Aah! Inception!

Rika on her knees, Ryo with his pants down and her head… next to his crotch! What was going on here?

It's either oral sex, or they're testing out some sort of penis-telephone.

“It’s obvious what’s going on here, and only one thing to do about it” Kazu whispered, straightening his towel up before trying to step forwards but Kenta, also in a towel, grabbed and pulled his arm down to a crouching position.

"Let go! There's no way I'm going to miss out testing the very first penis-phone!"

“Geez, man, are you serious?” barked Kenta, “You go there and Rika’s probably gonna rip your cock right off. And what if there’s something going on with Ryo, too? I don’t wanna be no Cyberdramon manburger.”

Possibly the strangest choice of words to ever grace the end of a sentence.

“Agh, you dumbass, I was just gonna go take a closer look!” Kazu grunted, pointing over the back of the couch where they could easily hide and spy from. Kenta settled down and silently nodded. They prepared to infiltrate.

Kazu and Kenta have learned the first lesson of not being seen: Not to stand up. However, they have chosen a very obvious piece of cover.

Meanwhile, Rika was still lost into giving Ryo the blow job of his life, and it was now difficult to tell who was enjoying that fact more. Ryo had felt her use the hand on his thighs to fondle his balls for a while, but she removed it. Her eyes were closed, her hand was moving back and between her legs, “I can’t believe, ohhh man. Is she THAT horny?” Ryo asked himself, panting and gasping all the while Rika sucked. His thoughts were confirmed when he heard her unbuckle her tight pants and pushed them off to have them drop off, her panties being slid down to her the underline of her thighs.

She has to PUSH her pants off, yet his fall off like he was wearing a loosely tied bed-sheet? Maybe he IS that awesome...

“Oh, my, fucking, god… She’s masturbating…!” Kenta eagerly whispered to Kazu, who seemed absorbed in watching the scene, only for him to freak out when he caught sight of his friend’s right hand whacking himself off, “Kazu, what the hell?!”

“This is like watching a porno, dude, ohh, hell, she looks tight. Wonder if…” Kazu half-groaned, closing an eye as he hotly panted, his eyes training themselves on Rika’s behind.

It's like watching a porno, only with a greater chance of having your dick split in half if you're caught.

Kenta wasn’t sure of what he was murmuring about, he thought Kazu had gone delirious after seeing Rika and Ryo like this; he couldn’t deny the whole thing wasn’t hot. He even was hard as well. “Grr, well, if everyone’s doing it…” he said to himself reassuringly, reaching down to begin stroking himself as well, getting off from watching the fingering girl blowing their idol and hero.

That's how I always justify masturbating.

“…I’ve had enough of watching! Take me, Rika!” Kazu suddenly and passionately shouted, jumping from behind the couch, which startled everyone in the living. Fortunately, it hadn’t been loud to the point of waking up the two old digimon heavy sleepers. Rika cranked her head sideways slightly with half of Ryo’s cock still in her mouth, blinking along with him as she saw Kazu’s naked body briefly gliding towards her with a white towel falling down and behind.

That's a.. pleasant image.

“Kazu…?” Ryo asked in disbelief, Rika didn’t manage to say anything for the obvious reasons, but a very loud moan escaped her throat as an over-excited Kazu grabbed her by the buttocks and thrust five inches of boy meat into her tight, virgin cunt.

Annnd Kazu breaks the cardinal rule of voyeurism: Looky, but no touchy.

“Ohhhh, damn! This feels so good! So real, mmnnngh! So fucking tight!” Kazu happily groaned as his dick was squished by Rika’s ex-virginal pussy walls. The same feeling of ecstasy was shared even by Rika’s pain-ridden body and by consequence Ryo’s cock was sucked and clamped down on the hardest yet. The trio of youngsters moaned in unison with Kenta watching them and still inconspicuously wanking. Kazu’s primal instincts took the better of him and he began to mercilessly pound Rika, his hands roaming her butt violently as his hips thrusted both with force and passion.

Ryo groaned in delight as he finally hit his climax, Rika moaning and letting him go as he began to wildly thrash around. He took hold of his own cock and then aimed it at Rika, his erratic cum shots being focused in her face’s direction. When the generous helping of semen was erratically distributed along her cheeks and rest of her face, Rika finally had time to moan and yelp haplessly as her bleeding pussy continued being pounded on. “K-Kazu, what the hell do you think,” she trembled, falling to her hands as the boy humped her like a dog in heat.

Christ, she must have been blowing him for like, a full freaking hour. MY jaw feels a little sore after eating a particularly chewy piece of taffy.

“C’mon, don’t be meaaaaaannn Rika…! You’re liking this, aren’t you?!” Kazu moaned out in lust, pounding Rika even harder as her pre juices allowed his shaft to slide in and out more easily. “You’re… gonna… cum, huh?!”

William Shatner'd there for a second.

Rika grit her teeth together, shutting one eye as she looked back at the horny Kazu with a growl, “GET IT DONE ALREADY, NUMBSKULL!” she roared, making Ryo, who was already spent, take a step back. Kazu started blushing as he began doing what he thought was his best to fuck Rika’s brains out, his hips rhythmically moving along with his partner. His penis was starting to leak pre, and Rika truly was near the edge. It didn’t take them very long to come together, and moan in unison as their orgasms went off at the same time.

Orgasms, apparently, act much like explosives.

Rika’s legs finally gave up and she plopped down to the floor, Kazu having stepped back at the right time for his cock to slide out so he wouldn’t fall down with her. He moaned as his now semi-hard cock hung down, completely wet with a mixture of his sperm and Rika’s juices. He was satisfied, his goofed-out face was proof of it, but at the same time, he seemed more tired than Rika and Ryo combined. He fainted.

He can't defend himself! Quick, finish him off!

“Woah. You really worked it all out of him, Rika!” Ryo commented in a honestly impressed way as he looked at their mess, placing his hands on his flanks with a grin. Rika suddenly sat up, minding not the fact her mid-section was still somewhat sore. She glared up to Ryo and put her index in a threatening way just under his chin, her cunt still dripping the same mixed substance coating Kazu’s member.

Index fingers are terrifying. Finally, somebody else who understands!

“If you EVER tell anyone about this, I’ll promise that I’ll tear it right out of you and feed it to your mouth!” Rika barked, looking back at Kazu’s unconscious form, “It was a dream, that’s all. For him,” she then looked in the couch’s direction, “And if you try to convince him of otherwise, Kenta, you’re gonna PAY.”

Yes, it was the middle one.

With that, Rika picked her pants up and violently stormed off to her private quarters where Renamon was. Kenta had fallen on his butt, his towel on his throbbing and still raging erection, blushing madly, “I-I… uh… I didn’t see anything!” he said as Rika’s piercing glare came his way.

Aww yee-ah, she's going to her and Renamon's private quarters with a wet vagina. Now we're getting somewhere.

Ryo half-laughed, “Still the same ‘ol ice queen. Ah well, never been happier after collecting a debt, haha,” he grinned, looking into Kazu’s way, “Bet it’s the same for him.”

Alright, come on, enough of them! Get to the Renamon!

The End.

Oh god dammit!


A week in life chapter 1: Monday by Psycho Backlasher

This story takes place in an alternate earth, where the two dominant species on the planet are Humans (that’s us) and Zoanmorphs (Zoans for short. Those are anthropomorphic animals that became an official ‘race’ in the early 1940s). The year is 2008, and this short story will revolve around the life of Prowler, an anthropomorphic coyote and unofficial ambassador and advocate of peace and equality between humans and Zoans. This takes place in America, in the fictional city of Los Santos, similar to our New York.

Humans and anthropomorphic animals co-existing? Great. I look forward to the humans being complete assholes for no other reason than just being xenophobic jerks.

[Image: AWeekInTheLife.jpg]

A week in the life of.. no one, I guess.

Monday

A week in the life of Monday.

When Prowler Dharke packed his little brother and sister’s lunches this morning, he made sure that they finished their breakfast before sending them off.

Anthropomorphic animal or not, his parents really went overboard with the name "Prowler Dharke." Parents, don't give your kids names that are basically a euphemism for "Rapist."

“Finish your milk.” Prowler pointed at his brother, Hunter’s glass. “It’s good for you!” It had been tough raising his 12-year-old brother and his 16-year-old sister, Stella, on his own. Especially when it was only six years ago when he discovered he even had siblings, and by now, he was old enough to be their father at the age of 32.

Milk must be a strange subject now that there are anthropomorphic animals around.

“Okay, okay.” Mumbled the 12-year-old before he downed the rest of his (rather large) glass of milk in several slow gulps, letting out a sigh of relief as he finished. He looked up at his older brother who fondly ruffled his ears and wiped his milk mustache off with a napkin.

Heart pounding action!

“Atta boy Hunter!” Prowl chuckled and handed them their backpacks. “You two be good now, y’hear?” He warned, kneeling down and giving them each a big hug. “I don’t want the principal calling me because you two made those high school kids wet themselves again, got it?” He said firmly, but his facial expression said that he was proud of them.

Well, at least the humans aren't segregating them. That's a start.

“We’ll be good.” Stella promised and kissed Prowl on the cheek before she turned around and ran to the door.

Prowl smirked at Hunter teasingly and puckered up, making the younger coyote scream and run, but the older coyote caught him by the wrist and yanked him back, wrapping him in his powerful, furry arms so he couldn’t move and planted smooches on top of his head, just to gross him out, before letting him go.

That's a good way to get a fur ball.

“Bye Prowl!” Hunter chuckled as he followed his sister out the door.

Prowler sighed and cleared away their plates and glasses, hoping that they’d have a good day. He tended to worry about them needlessly; much like his human foster mother did for him when she was alive. He put the dishes in the sink to wash later and stepped out onto the balcony. Their apartment was on the fifth floor, and he could see Hunter and Stella catch the school bus. He watched them do it every morning, just to make sure they were okay. This was a rather dangerous neighborhood after all, and he was planning on moving them somewhere safer.

"Welp, better put these dishes up as to not break them when the inevitable sex happens."

There was a knock on the door, and Prowl strode over to it, stepping over the small table in the living room, leaping over the old couches with the foam visible through rips on the brown leather, he crossed the narrow hallway and got to the door. He leaned against the wall with his forearm and answered it, only to be greeted by Melissa’s smiling face. She looked like she was going somewhere special with all the make up she had on.

Must be hard to wear make up over all that fur.

“Hey there!” Melissa giggled. Her hands were clasped together behind her and she was rocking back and forth playfully on the balls of her feet. “Kids home?”

"That depends: Who the hell are you?"

Prowl crossed his arms and cocked a brow at her flirtatiously, leaning his shoulder against the wall. “No, but who wants to know?” He grinned at her, undressing her with his eyes. Melissa was their human neighbor from two rooms down, and like a good portion of humans, she had started finding Zoans attractive. She was in her early twenties, still in college, had a rather shapely figure, a sizable pair of hips and breasts, blond, curly hair and a beauty mark on her face, just above the corner of her lips. She reminded him an awful lot like Marilyn Monroe.

Oh, she's a human. That makes more sense, because I thought she was one of those anthropomorphic animals, and what I was imagining was one of them putting make-up over their fur, that would look so silly an- Oh, sorry, there's more story.

Without another word, she pushed past the door and brought her body against Prowl’s front, her luscious lips pressing hungrily against the front of his muzzle. He was used to it by now. She came almost every week since they moved here just to fuck his brains out. She was a strange girl, Melissa. She had sex with a different man every week, or so she told him.

Having sex with a different man every week for who knows how many weeks? It must be like fucking a hallway at this point. And then your dick falls off afterwards.

-A new man and Prowler, at least- for she had sex with him no less than once a week after their first month here.

She probably has a schedule book now.

He knew her kind, she was a nymphomaniac, a sex addict, and she happened to love the coyote’s fur against her bare, tender flesh more than anything. They wrestled their way to Prowl’s room where she broke away from him, breathing hard from lust. She stood back and took a good look at him.

I've always hypothesized that suplexing your partner before doing the deed is the key to great sex. You can imagine why I'm still a virgin.

Prowl licked the side of his muzzle patiently, standing still for her. She loved to examine him, to see and touch his body as she saw fit, like he was a toy made only for her pleasure, and really, he didn’t mind.

Melissa bit the tip of her thumb as she circled him. He was so tall, standing at 6’4, and so well built, with broad shoulders, and a distinct six pack even though his midriff was covered in tan, sand colored fur. He had a powerful chest, big, strong furry arms- and the way he was dressed! He wore faded pinstriped boxers that have lost their elasticity from overuse, and the only reason they stayed on him was that he had a sizable package attached to his crotch that kept the thing from falling, so they just hung there, draped on his hips, the limp waistband just bellow his tail. He didn’t throw anything away as long as they could still be used, explaining the choice in clothing. She lifted his tail playfully and eyed his ass- oh god he had a man’s ass-

I can't tell who I'm supposed to be attracted to at this point. We'll see.

“Ya’ done playin’?” Prowl asked her, still uneasy about having his tail lifted. A male lifting his tail to someone was like a declaration of homosexuality, and while he didn’t mind the gays, he did get a little uptight when someone lifted his fifth limb without asking.

Oh, that's cute. The anthropomorphic race is already coming up with ways to give people the "Gay" label, and it only took around 70 years. Moving right along as a culture.

“No…” Melissa said breathlessly, running her fingers through the course fur on his firm back. She stripped her tank top off and hugged him from behind, pressing her breasts against his back and rubbing his firm pectorals with her hands. She rubbed him from his chest, right down to his abs, which she kneaded lustfully, all covered in softer, smoother fur than his back, before she pulled his boxers down. “Just a little longer…”

"Just a little longer before we have to begrudgingly go back to describing the female body."

Prowl quite enjoyed the hug. He always did, even as a kid. Melissa wasn’t wearing a bra, and that was a bonus. He stepped out of his boxers when they slid down his thighs and legs, and stood still once more, letting Melissa have her way with him. She was like an octopus, grabbing and groping and stroking… of course, he wasn’t complaining. He groaned softly as she kneaded his firm, furry ass, mostly to please her, because he knew she loved getting a reaction out of him. What she liked about his ass, he’ll never know. All the good stuff is up front!

Oh come on, even he's more attracted to himself at this point. Just get the girl out of here already and let him have sex with himself.

“Ooh, you like that?” She asked, breathing hotly against his back, “You like it when I play with your ass?” She gave his firm cheek a squeeze.

“I just love the way you play with me, sugar.”

“Oh God Prowler I want you so bad- growl for me-”

“Grrr…”

"Uh.. uhh.. rawwr. W-was that good enough?

“I said growl!” She tugged on his tail, and a low growl rumbled in his chest, coming out as a snarl, complete with exposed fangs, though his eyes were closed and his brows were furrowed in pleasure, he had grabbed her wrists and pinned her down on his bed with him on top. “Yes oh God YES!”

“You’re one weird dame…” The coyote thought to himself, though he quite enjoyed the treatment. He released her wrists, planting his paws on either side of her head, his knees on either side of her hips.

I guess he's going to have sex with her belly button.

Melissa started rubbing his chest again, finding his nipples beneath all that fur. A satisfactory grin plastered her face as she pinched and twisted one playfully, getting another growl out of the coyote. “Ohhhh yes… Prowly likes it when I play with his nipples, doesn’t he?”

“Yeah-“

“He loves it, doesn’t he?” She pinched and twisted harder, getting a wince and a breathy groan out of him.

"Yes, yes! Just, for the love of god, let go of the nipples!"

“Oh yeaaah…”

“Aaand…” Her free hand caressed his chest, down his abs, his groin, his canine sheath of furry flesh that protected his manhood, cupping his large testicles that dangled over her groin. “You love this, don’t you?” She wiggled her fingers so the digits batted his furry scrotum, shaking his balls playfully.

We get it, he's hot and everything about his body is perfect. Get to the intercourse!

The fur on the back of his neck and spine bristled and he brought his muzzle close to her ear. “Lose the skirt. Now.” He growled through barred fangs.

She squealed gleefully as he rolled off her so she could get rid of her miniskirt with as many exaggerated movements as possible while the coyote lay down, resting his head on his folded arms. When she was ready, she had him spread his legs and got between his thighs.

.. She IS a little strange, isn't she.

“Take it easy.” Prowl told her in vain as she played with his testicles and stroked his sheath, pulling it down all the way so his cock slid out of it. It resembled a human’s cock, but with the texture of a canine’s. It was a pinkish peach color with thick veins traveling up its length, and was coated in a film of slimy, natural lubrication.

Slimy is not an adjective that should ever be used to describe anything during sex.

Melissa jacked it off vigorously, biting on her lower lip as the hot meat warmed her fingers. Each time she switched hands, she left clear strands of natural lubricant between them and his cock. Prowl growled lowly for her in pleasure. She was quite skilled with her hands. She knew where to pressure, where to squeeze, where to rub… before long, his cock had engorged with a bit of blood and was now semi limp. It wasn’t that he wasn’t aroused, he was, it was just too big to erect fully unless he was totally aroused, and that never seemed to happen unless it involved lots of kink, or a cock ring. At 14 inches in length, two, maybe three inches in diameter and still not rock hard, it was a wonder he got any at all. But Melissa thought it was beautiful, especially now that it was leaking copious amounts of precum as if he was already close to an orgasm. She knew for a fact that he wasn’t. He had various tells when he was close, and lots of pre wasn’t one of them.

14 inches? What the hell? With 14 inches of penis, you're getting to the point where getting an erection could make you pass out from blood loss.

“You’re not just gonna look at it, are you?” Prowl raised a brow at her questioningly. She loved being pressured. “Spread those legs for me?”
Melissa smiled at him and leaned back, overlapping her thighs on his as she showed him her shaved snatch.

"HELLO! Hello.. hello.." Get it? It's an echo because of.. her.. ... Ahem. Moving on.

Prowl growled lustfully as he ran a fingerpad gently over that drooling pink slit, lifting her clitoral hood with his thumb and rubbing her sensitive little bulb. She started moaning loudly almost immediately, even more so when he slid his thumb into her sopping wet hole and moved it around in little circles. He tortured her like this for a while, loving those sounds she made. He retracted his hand, his cock having erected just a little more so that it stood up, but still flopped flexibly when shook.

Cock can still flop flexibly if shook, gotcha. This is good information to have.

Breathing hard, Melissa straddled his crotch, wrapping her thighs around his monstrous dick so the bottom pressed against her pussy. She could feel every vein on it pumping blood in tandem with his heartbeats. She started sliding back and forth so his cock rubbed against her labia and her thighs, smoothly, thanks to the natural lubricant.

I can just imagine her turning towards the fourth wall, smiling and modeling a bottle of "Natural Lubricant."

The coyote shut his eyes and groaned loudly, enjoying the texture of her warm pussy and her smooth thighs rubbing his length up and down, up and down, up and down… she was picking up speed now, and the squelching sounds of cock sliding between pussy and thigh filled the room. Prowl grabbed her outer thighs and started bucking his hips against her movements, enhancing the sensation for the both of them.

Well maybe he should do a little bit of work, instead of being so STIFF! Hi-yoooooooooo!

This was enough for her; she could get off to this. The veins on his semi-limp, burning cock massaged her labia and clitoris enough with its hot flesh, the vision of Prowl moaning and groaning, as he bucked his hips and fucked her thighs turned her on so much- “Prowler- stop!” She cried, and he obeyed, letting her legs go. She backed away from his manhood, now even harder still, but STILL not as hard as it ought to be, like when she used a cock ring on him. Sticky strings of slime connected her pussy and thighs to his monster cock as she backed away. “Where are your condoms?”

Always a great question to ask AFTER you've already started having sex.

“Same place they always are, doll-face.” Prowl sighed huskily, his eyes half closed so all she could see were half of each of his deep, golden irises. “I just got some new ones. Extra thin and stretchy. They feel like I ain’t wearing any at all.”

"They'll break real easy so we won't have to deal with a full condom later!"

Melissa giggled and opened his drawer in his side-table, rooting around and grabbing a condom. She tore the pack open with her teeth and grabbed his cock, rolling the blue latex down over it. She loved putting condoms on him, it was hot, and he approved. When the condom was on, Prowl sat up and got on his knees while Melissa lay on her back and raised her legs for him. She saw his cock with every vein making an impression on the exterior of the thin, shiny blue latex it was coated with, and it made her stomach turn in deep, rending lust.

And indigestion.

Prowl got on top of her, pressing the tip of his cock against her pussy, she hooked her legs around his hips and stayed that way, bracing for the entry. The tip of his cock entered with surprisingly little difficulty. These were really good condoms. He let out a low moan of pleasure and pressed his muzzle against her cleavage.

Now HE turns to the fourth wall, holding up the condom package and giving a thumbs up.

She wrapped her arms around his head, scratching behind his ears affectionately as he slid deeper and deeper into her. His large tongue oozed out of his muzzle and lathered her breasts with saliva, circling each mound slowly until they circled each nipple, which he suckled and nibbled on, alternating between left and right. With one last push, he was inside her. Even though she had lots of sex and took many large cocks, she couldn’t take more than eight to nine inches of his monster without risking injury, and he knew that. He didn’t push any deeper, and instead, started gyrating his hips back and forth at a steady rhythm.

"Who's a good boy? Who's a dood boy, you was! Oh yes you wuz!"

Melissa was screaming now. His size, his movements, he didn’t even need to find her G-spot; his dick took up all the space she had to hide it. This intense pleasure wasn’t unrequited as she could hear him moaning passionately just as she screamed. He forced his muzzle on top of her screaming mouth and silenced her by thrusting his vulgarly large tongue into it. It was so thick, she couldn’t even close her mouth around it, so instead, she sucked his hot, powerful tongue off contently, pretending it was another cock.

I.. I can't think of anything to say about that mental image.

Prowl quickened his pace, moving rapidly and smoothly. Melissa wrapped her legs around his hips tightly. It felt like he was going to split her in two, it hurt, but the pleasure she got from it overwhelmed the pain, and they were moaning into each other's mouths so loudly that old Mrs. Bremnan from the flat beneath them turned up her iPod to drown them out, humming loudly as she knitted socks for her grandchildren at a furious pace.

Suddenly everything turns green, she becomes silhouetted in black, the ipod is silhouetted in white, and she just starts dancing.

As their tongues danced together hotly, Melissa clenched her pussy around his colossal cock and let out a shrill cry as she came hard. She was panting for breath, but he didn’t stop. In fact, he just ploughed her harder still, having used her orgasm as a signal telling him that he could go harder. Prowler loved it rough, and so did she.

She's not panting for breath because of an orgasm, you just hit her lungs! Pull out, pull out!

Melissa felt his tongue pull out of her mouth slowly, inch by inch as he grit his fangs together. She watched him with difficulty and counted his tells: His ears were tilted back, his fangs were bared, his eyes were shut tightly, his nostrils were flaring rapidly from his quickened breaths and pants, he was gripping her hips tightly, he was tilting his head up so his nose pointed at the ceiling- he was quickening his pace- he was cumming, and so was she!

Like Sherlock Holmes, this one is.

The Zoan and the Human cried out in tandem as he buried nine inches of his throbbing cock into her cunt, inflating the condom inside her with his hot, thick, creamy white spunk, trapping it inside her as she came a second time this morning, harder than the first time. His whole body tensed, his athletic, flexible build let him arch his back in an almost perfect crescent. He continued to ejaculate for what seemed like two, maybe three minutes before he gently thrust in and out, milking himself in her. They were both panting hard and Prowl’s tongue hung from the side of his muzzle like a tired dog’s.

“Wow…” She squeaked.

He jumps off the bed, panting like a dog and looking around for the source of the squeak.

“I’ll say…” He panted, making sure the condom didn’t spill any of his semen when he pulled his cock out of it, leaving it inside her. With a bit of coaxing, he managed to pull it out without popping it. It looked like an engorged, pale blue, shiny water balloon filled with white glue. He tied it up and planned on getting rid of it later. It was still dripping with her cloudy, watery juices, which all gushed out of her and onto his sheets when he pulled the cum balloon out of her. At least he didn’t make too much of a mess. There must be a liter, maybe a pint of jizz in that condom, and he was glad it wasn’t on his sheets or the floor.

"Cum Balloon" is such a charming term.

Melissa sat up, catching her breath as Prowl tossed her a towel. She wiped her sweaty body off, and then her thighs and pussy so she was relatively dry. She got off his bed and limped toward her discarded clothes.

“You okay?” He asked her.

"Just some major internal damage, don't worry about me, I'll be fine."

“More than okay!”

“You sure? You’re limping.”

“It hurts so good.”

"Yeah.. but that doesn't explain why you're limping. I mean, your vagina is CLOSE to your legs, but they aren't-"

"I SAID I'M FINE!


“Where’re you going now?” He asked her as she put her clothes back on and went to his bathroom to wash her face. He got up and followed her, his still semi-limp dick dripping dollops of white, gooey cream from the tip as he walked over to her.

“College! I’m gonna be late!” She laughed, limping past him hurriedly, her make-up looking proper again. How girls did that so fast, he didn’t know. “I had a good time! See you next week!” She laughed and tried to run, but he grabbed her arm.

Aah! A witch!

He couldn’t believe she had school today! Fucking him like that! “Wait.” He said, propping the cum-balloon down somewhere, he grabbed a banana from the kitchen and handed it to her in the living room, where she waited. “At least have some breakfast.”

Don't hand her a banana, dammit! She's a nymphomaniac, that'll just distract her.

She smiled at him and accepted the banana. “You’re sweet,” She added, looking down at his cock. She wiped the tip of his manhood with her index finger, getting a nice, thick, glob of semen on it, before popping it in her mouth and sucking it off. “Mmm… Thanks for the protein-filled breakfast, Prowler.” She giggled, and ran out, shutting the door behind her and hiding her limp by skipping.

I guess that's not so bad. She could have DRANK the entire condom.

Prowl shook his head at her, crossing his arms, a light grin playing across his muzzle. “Glad I’m not her dad.” He told himself out loud, jokingly, as he sat down on the couch. There was a loud, wet POP, and his eyes went round, his ears drooping as he felt the warmth of his own cum drenching his legs, the sofa and the floor. He had sat on the condom.

"Prowl, what's that big, white, crusty stain on the couch?"

"Oh, that? That's just, uh.. just some milk. Yeah."

"Really, are you sure? 'Cause it sure doesn't smell like-"

"IT WAS MILK!"
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I LOL'D at these commentaries. You should do some more sometime!
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Actually, those were the only two stories I was given permission to talk about.
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Lies! I gave you permission to do my Takato x Renamon story too! O:
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Where's that one?
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In the Author's Domain, called: "An Unexpected Visitor." If I recall correctly :3
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(01-31-2011 04:48 AM)DragonMasterX Wrote: Lies! I gave you permission to do my Takato x Renamon story too! O:

Any chance you'll give him permission to do the other two that I requested from you?
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Turned this one around in less than two months. I'm pretty proud myself.



An Unexpected Visitor, by DragonMasterX.


Takato woke up as the first rays of sunlight peered through the seams of his window’s blinds, his eyes groggily opening as he sat up on his moderately large bed and he reached back to run a hand through his brown hair. He then stretched and put his other hand up to his face before yawning, groaning as he got up to his feet on the wooden floor of his apartment’s room.

Bed: Moderately large. Hair: Brown. Floor: Wooden. Now that we've gotten that out of the way, on to the interesting stuff.

It had been six years since the D-Reaper was defeated at the hands of the Tamers and their faithful digimon partners. Peace reigned in both the Real and Digital Worlds. The Digimon had found their way back to their home dimension and it had been lonely for Takato and the others but he eventually had found a way to link both worlds together again. During the following years, Takato, Rika, Henry and the others had delightfully spent time together with their digimon friends. Time went on, and children became teenagers, who later became adults.

DURING the following years? Are we just going to follow them while they dick around for 10 years?

Takato just didn’t have the luxury to play around with Guilmon anymore now that he was in college. Guilmon, with an increased amount of maturity over time now understood that Takato needed time alone as well, but they always set a day or two in when they’d meet up and play.

Oh, is that what they're calling it now?

This was such a day. And according to Takato’s memory, Guilmon had come to the real world during the last visit, so it was his time to travel to the Digital World to pay his old friend his ‘respects’ so to speak. It was a weekend, so it would be an ideal trip day!

"I'm gonna pay his 'respect' so hard, he won't walk straight for a week."

After a quick morning shower, Takato brushed his teeth and then went to get his clothes, “Hm, wonder where I put it…?” he asked as he scanned his room in his briefs. His wardrobe hadn’t considerably changed over time, but he now favored jeans. His mother had actually bought him a new pair and the bag had arrived the day before. He just had been too busy and rushed to remember where he had put the new jeans away.

Well this is certainly getting the blood flowing, now isn't it.

“Aw hell, I’ll just go for one of my older ones…” Takato groaned a bit, opening his closet where he produced a pair of lite-blue jeans from, his hands feeling the seamless fabric which elicited a smile since the piece of clothing was absolutely pristine.

Jesus, slow down! All this action is going to give me a heart attack.

Takato sat down at the edge of his bed to put the jeans on, but a tug around his waist alerted him. He felt his sides to look for the source of the compressing feeling and met with the reason he was struggling so much with fitting in: The jeans were a size too small. “Already…?” Takato mentally cursed, being reminded of the forewarning his mother had given him about clothes, which had been why she had sent him a new pair of jeans in the first place. “Aw, man, c’mon, fit! I haven’t gotten bigger yet!” he huffed in an irritated manner, pulling his jeans up to get his feet through the pants’ legs.

So.. he can't get the jeans on, or he can get the jeans on?

As a hopeless sigh left him, Takato plopped down to his bed with his half-worn jeans as a shadow loomed over him. He guessed it was just a cloud blocking out the sun but he quickly found that to be impossible; after raising the blinds and opened the windows he had witnessed a pristine blue sky with nary a cloud to be found. He quickly sat up and looked left and right for confirmation, the shadow suddenly off his sight. Takato was sure now, someone else beside himself was inside of the room.

What the hell is this? Get back to Takato trying on jeans!

“There’s only one person doing something like this…” he reasoned, standing back up to scan his room a second time before he felt a chilly air current underneath, “Oops!” he said as he realized his pants had dropped down to just over his knees, “Stupid jeans!”

Meanwhile, Ryo takes his pants off UPWARDS.

“It’s incredible how easy an assassination target you’d make,” a deep feminine voice echoed into Takato’s head, reminding him that he wasn’t alone. A white paw suddenly extended from out of the shadows towards him.

I'd be lying if I said I didn't sneak up on people and pretend to assassinate them sometimes.

“Gahh!” Takato snapped, trying to take a step back, but his bed and constrained legs made him trip backwards, the paw shot out and grabbed him by the collar of his shirt however, just in time.

I choose to imagine him yelling "WOAH WOAH WOOOAH!" before falling into and tipping over several priceless artifacts on pedestals.

“Fortunately, you’re just a college boy struggling with a pair of pants on a Saturday morning,” a vulpine said as the rest of the paw’s body appeared, revealing it to be Rika’s partner, Renamon.

"At least your not having pants on will save us some time."

Takato blushed and gulped a bit as Renamon helped him back to his feet, “Is it necessary that you make these flashy entrances? I mean, ever heard of doorbells?” he said with a sarcastic stare.

Yeah, an eight-foot fox monster standing on your front step ringing the door bell would have gone over great with the neighbors.

“That’s not my style,” Renamon softly smiled.

Renamon can smile?

“Weird to hear you talk about style,” Takato commented.

"Weird to hear you talk at all, you're usually murdering someone."

“I’m not the same Renamon as I used to be, you know,” the fox said as she folded her arms, her eyes closing in what seemed to be a contemplating stance, “But since you mentioned it, it’s also weird to have a serious conversation with someone half-dressed.”

Renamon must also sneak into bathrooms and point out how weird it is to have a conversation with someone while they're pooping. You snuck into someone's house, what did you expect?

“Huh? Oh… Oh!” Takato madly blushed again, recalling how he had never really properly dressed, “Yeah, uh, I would put these on but they’re being a bitch to slip in. Think they’re a size too small…” he tried explaining, seeing Renamon open on eye and raise an eyebrow.

“Why would you keep a pair of one-size-too-small jeans?”

"Maybe some of us like to crush our nads, your highness."

“Let’s just say I have been out of it lately,” Takato nervously grinned, although he knew he had just been lazy to go buy his own clothes. He had also been too lazy to search the new pair, but he wouldn’t let Renamon know that yet. “Say, could you uh… help me?”

Renamon’s tail twitched a bit. The boy was in a fix as he was, and if she was to continue with what she had come to do, she would need a fully dressed Takato. “I’ll… Alright, why not?” she said.

Renamon finds out why not when she accidentally gives him the mother of all wedgies.

Takato was asked to lie down so Renamon could wrap her paws on the legs of his pants, he would push forwards in order to slip his feet out. It worked quite fast, Renamon’s strong grip allowed Takato’s feet to come out of the pants’ legs flawlessly, although the matter of his waist section still lingered. “My paws are too big to zip a fly. I’ll keep the pressure on the sides, you zip it,” Renamon ordered as she reached to Takato’s sides almost instinctively, leaning forwards as her paws kept a firm grasp on his hips. Takato blushed as Renamon’s chest fur brushed in front of his nose, he could almost see what seemed to be two sizable lumps of flesh beneath all that conspicuous tuft of pristine white. “What’s wrong?” she asked, snapping Takato back to reality.

"Oh- uh.. nothing! Uh, heh, I was just trying to figure out the best way to zip up your boobs- I-I mean, zip your fly- er, my fly. Not your fly, my fly, nothing to do with your breasts at all- NO WAIT I MEAN.. what.. did.. you say again?"

“Uh, n-nothing,” Takato stuttered, bringing his hands to the task to do. He reached for the fly’s zipper, and with Renamon tugging behind and his own nervousness being replaced by conviction to see these damn pants fit, Takato struggled to push the zipper up. Renamon began putting down her own effort as he did and for a moment it seemed that it was all said and done in their favor, when Takato’s overconfidence pulled the zipper right out and an involuntary hip thrust caused the zipper to break and the fly to remain open, “Aw, nuts!”

Nuts, and pretty much everything else, yeah.

“…I’m sorry,” Renamon apologized. Takato sympathetically smiled although he wasn’t very pleased at the end result. He had to commend Renamon however.

“It’s okay, thanks for trying. Guess I’ll have to get something else…” he said to himself in disappointment, but before he could stand up Renamon pushed him forwards in a sudden move. Takato was reminded that her paws still were on his sides, her piercing sapphire eyes trained on his brown ones, “Renamon?”

"Staring contest, GO!"

“Allow me to make it up to you, Takato.” She suddenly was speaking with that stern, cold but honest voice he had always remembered her by. Takato was still wary however.

“Wh-what do you mean?”

Maybe she's going to bake you a cake, you thick bastard.

“You’re nineteen,” Renamon said with a somewhat of a savvy tone, but her eyes’ expression remained unchanged, “You’re not a little boy anymore. I disappointed you when you needed me, and now I feel like I must repay a debt. Would you say no to me?” she suddenly stammered. Takato gulped, his mind and waist quickly making it a point that her black claws were still on his waist. Renamon wasn’t one to take things to the point of hurting somebody but her intimidating icy stare was making him more than nervous. “Plus…” this made Takato blink as he detected an uncharacteristic blush stain her yellow fur on her face, “You really are nineteen. You look… attractive, to me, Takato…”

"Takato, there comes a time in every young man's life where he has to be deflowered by a giant bi-pedal fox."

Wait, what was this, some sort of erotic dream? A wet dream? Had he not woken up in fact? He reached to pinch his own cheek and winced a bit.

He must have some pretty boring dreams if he normally dreams about trying to put a pair of jeans on for 30 minutes.

Renamon almost giggled, but a small chuckle came out instead “This is very real, Takato. It’s been a long while since we’ve seen each other, but trust me, much like Guilmon has matured significantly, I’ve also changed. For the better, Rika says,” she sighed. Takato detected a bit of dismay in her last words, but decided not to push it.

It's a good thing Takato is turned on by cryptic nonsense.

“So uh…” he finally said, “You mean you want us to… y’know…” Takato made hand-gestures, eliciting a similar short chuckle from Renamon, who nodded at his poor hand impression of the coitus. Takato gulped, Renamon also detected this.

“Do you not find me attractive?” Renamon said in a bitter man, although she did sound kind of wounded. Takato was quick to move his hands in a defensive gesture.

You shouldn't say things into bitter men, I don't think they'd appreciate that.

“No no, it’s not that! It’s that uh… I’ve, uh, slept with girls before and all, but… with a digimon… I’ve never…” he babbled. And it was all true. From the first time he had seen a womanly shape and appraised it through the eyes of a lustful man, he had never in his wildest dreams imagined intercourse with a womon. Renamon seemed both insulted and curious about his uncertainty. She was willing to prove his doubts unjustified, however.

Unjustify the HELL out of those doubts.

“So are you saying we can’t please a human at the same level another would?” Renamon presumed, making Takato red in the face at her aggressive forwardness but he didn’t get a word in before she quickly pushed him on his back, climbed up onto the bed beside him and leaned forwards to kiss him deeply whilst the paw that wasn’t resting beside his head took a grab at the semi-hard on through the fabric of his pants.

"Please remove my pants first if you're going to do that. These pants are very tight around the crotch area, and I'm not particularly excited by the prospect of my dick being crushed."

Takato was beyond baffled, but there was Renamon. A partner six years ago, another pussy on his bed this year. “Oh man, oh man… what’s gonna happen? What if during sex digimon eat their partners or something?” he thought, his worries being briefly silenced as Renamon’s foxy lips pressed onto his human ones. She soothed him with a long, wet kiss, and when she was done, he gave him a somewhat playful smirk.

"He's gonna taste so good after this."

“You’re hard already,” she observed without even turning her gaze from his flustered visage, “You had been staring at my breasts through my fur before, right? Rika was right… human teenagers are very akin to male digimon in terms of arousal,” she half-laughed. Renamon seemed to happy about this in Takato’s opinion. Maybe she had been telling the truth about her change, but not only that, she seemed to actually want this beyond anything he could tell. What he COULD tell however, was that Renamon was carefully coaxing his erect cock out of his briefs, through the opened fly.

What change?!

It was odd how relaxed he suddenly found himself to be in her tender grasp. Those big clawed paws always had looked menacing, but their soft pads were now holding his seven inch member with such care that he thought she was going to kiss it goodnight. “Ahhn…” moaned Takato as Renamon softly put more pressure in her grab. Takato’s reaction being into her expected range of possibilities, she encouraged herself to continue and then started stroking his length up and down repeatedly. Takato’s groans started to pick up in volume.

Has he been kissed goodnight like that before or something?

“You aren’t as big as I’ve seen, but it’s still good. Tell me, does this feel good?” Renamon asked as she looked at him with her eyes half-closed, Takato could only respond with a louder moan as Renamon’s side fingers squeezed the cock and she shook it teasingly, pre shooting out onto the digit of her middle finger. “I’ll take that as a yes.”

Is she going to use it like a gear-shift next?

She kept pumping him with a paw, leaning her muzzle in to lick his cheek with her hot canine tongue, making Takato shudder in a mix of pleasure and anxiety. He was seriously considering the idea now, and with every added second of her continuous cock massage, Takato grew hornier and hornier. “Renamon… ghh…” he moaned, “I want you,” he finally said, making Renamon smile in return.

This far in and he's just now considering the idea of sexual intercourse? Come on, Takato. You're lagging behind here. Catch up.

Takato prepared to unbutton the top part of his jeans to lower them, but Renamon stopped him, “You don’t want to go through all that again, do you? Keep them on, Takato,” she told him, a devious smile now planted in her vulpine visage as she left his cock and teasingly crawled on all fours to the center of his bed, “I want you to take me from behind,” she commanded, presenting her fine rump, her fluffy tail waving to the side to reveal a glistening patch of white fur gathered at the perimeter of her needy cunt.

"You're going to have to position me yourself, I can't move my legs in these."

Takato couldn’t believe what he was experience. Renamon, an ice queen taken to literacy all along, was now horny as heck and for him no less! Screw the tightness in his crotch, hell, he needed her too!

He didn’t make her wait. Climbing to his knees, he crawled towards Renamon, her round behind looked inviting, but Takato wasn’t much of an anal person. Actually, the very fact he was going to mount her from behind amused him as he thought it was what dogs did; maybe Renamon was in heat? He hoped that wasn’t the case, and if it was, he sure hoped Digimon and Human hybrids were impossible, because he had forgotten to restock on condoms.

Wait, how many girls is Mr. Can't-Get-His-Goddamn-Pants-On screwing?

The young human got his fingers on Renamon’s plump butt cheeks, his erection pointed in line with her cunt. Without so much as a gasp, he began pushing forwards, the head parting Renamon’s folds which made her sigh in bliss as her cunny accepted the intruder. Takato moaned at the constriction and forced a grip on her behind for effect, his jeans bumping onto her thighs as he quickly finished the insertion. He was more eager than he might have wanted to let on.

I find it hard to believe that someone could POSSIBLY be eager to have sex with the person who just finished giving them a handjob.

Renamon wasn’t going to poke fun at that, in fact, she was hoping he would start soon. She was getting wetter and hornier by the moment, her arousal filling the room; a powerful scent of aphrodisiac effect for males. Takato was affected almost instantly and put the weight of his body onto her back as he shifted positions, his hands falling beneath her sides before they reached for her chest. Renamon gasped at his quickness at fishing her breasts out of that sea of platinum white chest fur.

Fishing for breasts. That's an interesting metaphor.

“Woah, they’re pretty big, I would’ve never imagined…” Renamon heard Takato say, she blushed at the compliment, though she knew he had been fixed on experimenting with her tits ever since his earlier pause. She let out a sustained moan of bliss as the boy eagerly began playing with her mounds, squeezing them with moderate strength and kneading them as if they were dough. The natural softness of the mammaries was only amplified by Renamon’s puffy fur, her breasts felt like fluffy stuffed animals in his grip.

So her breasts feel like a stuffed pilsbury dough boy?

The attention at that point shifted to her breasts and how much Takato was enjoying to play with them, his inserted penis not budging from where it was hilted in. He had forgotten about the tightness around his protesting testicles in their constraints, his penis was spurting pre solely from the combined might of her moans and her overpowering, intoxicating scent. He spent a good while with the fox’s large teats, until the arousal naturally began to move his instincts. Takato’s hips moved back, the pussy groaning with squishy sounds as the dick made its way out until only the head remained inside. He slammed himself back in.

“Ohhhh, Takato!” she cried out. Her pussy clenched even harder as she began murring, her eyes screwing shut as the mixture of pleasure points at her crotch and chest combined into an amalgam of pure bliss. His jeans kept smacking her thighs as he rode her, his hands cupping and playing with her breasts tirelessly, she enjoyed it all.

Renamon really enjoys crushing people's testicles in tight pants.

“Renamon… ohhh, damn it, I’m so near… you feel so damn tight!” Takato cursed, feeling his endurance leave him as he already had been aroused massively by her earlier unfinished hand job. He began thrusting a lot harder and also picked up in speed, their hips taking less than a second to join after he would pull back for a new hump.

“Ahhh, Takato!” she gasped, falling forwards as her arms weakened from having supported their weight. Her paws clenched around the covers and Takato’s hands were sandwiched between her luscious tits and the bed. She was starting to near her own climax. The pleasure they were building was edging them towards the point of no return, their orgasms only a few seconds away.

Hopefully they'll realize after they're done that there was no point in keeping the jeans on, them being BROKEN and all.

Knowing his ejaculation was imminent, Takato suddenly shifted positions again. After his hands removed from her chest, they placed themselves back on her buttocks and he arched back, starting to put a lot more strength behind his thrusts. Renamon looked back with a lustful, flushed face, her tongue flailing out as if she wanted to say something to him but more heated moans would come out instead.

She either wanted to say something, or catch a fly.

“Renamon!”

“Takato!”

Asesino!

They shouted, their climaxes hit. Her juices splashed against his cock, his cum shot right into her womb. A mixture of it dripped down his shaft, staining his jeans and coated Renamon’s thighs partially. Takato collapsed on top of her again. Renamon’s legs gave out.

“D-Damn…” he uttered, his face resting on Renamon’s right shoulder, his nose mere inches from her neck, “Renamon, that felt… I dunno, I’ve never… it was incredible…”

He's never felt that before, yet he's used all of his condoms? What, was he making balloon animals with them?

“I told you so…” the fox digimon said with a small smile, wrapping her tail around his leg in a affectionate manner, “Digimon can please humans just fine, see?”

"You didn't really do anything, but sure, why not?"

“So did you just let me do you to prove your point?”

“Maybe. But I can’t say I didn’t enjoy it as well,” she admitted. They both smiled at each other. After a few minutes of resting from their afterglow, the two separated and got back to their feet to get cleaned.

"That was great. I don't even remember what I was doing before you showed up!"

Cue a shot of Guilmon sitting all alone, crying in a corner.


“So, mind me asking something?” Takato said as he struggled to get his tight jeans off since they were now covered in their mixture. Renamon came out of the washroom with her fur readily brushed and pristine.

“What is it?”

“What did you come here today for?”

"That's a.. very good question."

“Rika sent me. She wanted to make sure you wouldn’t oversleep since today is the sixth anniversary of our group” Renamon said, a conspicuous level of pride in her voice.

So, she came to make sure Takato wasn't going to be late to their meeting, and then promptly made both of them late?

“Oh! Sure… I uh… I hadn’t forgotten!” Takato laughed, starting to search his second closet for a change of clothes, “I was gonna go ahead and meet with Guilmon actually!” At least, he knew that was the truth.

“Good, then let’s not make him wait. He might be more mature, but he hasn’t learned about patience yet.”

"You mean we shouldn't make him wait LONGER than we already have, right?"

"Jeez, you're a stickler."


“But first…”

“Yes?”

“Can you help me find a package signed by my mom?” The teen asked. Renamon grimaced slightly, but agreed to help.

The End.

No, wait! I want to hear about them searching for a package for 20 minutes!
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Hahaha, I think you've realized your talent, As.

(01-31-2011 08:55 AM)CloneWarrior Wrote:
(01-31-2011 04:48 AM)DragonMasterX Wrote: Lies! I gave you permission to do my Takato x Renamon story too! O:

Any chance you'll give him permission to do the other two that I requested from you?

Sure. Wanna try your hand at "The Devil's Springs" and "I know what you did Yesterday"?
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I decided to do both of these in a double-feature of sorts. It didn't turn out so well, in my opinion.


The Devil’s Springs, by DragonMasterX.

Mimi sighed as she sat on the comfy bed of her room. Her friends had gone on ahead and so had Palmon. She had taken her cowboy hat and shoes off. She lay sprawled on the bed as she meditated about the recent events the group of youngsters and their digimon guardians had been through. It had been one disaster after another, fighting, fighting and more fighting. Mimi disliked violence and she wasn’t supposed to be in another world, she was supposed to be in summer camp with all her friends, not having to deal with the fate of some alternate dimension. She softly whimpered to herself; she missed her own world, she missed its normal ways and not having to run off every single time some creature decided to smash a gigantic foot in their way.

I always figured people living in Japan were used to giant monsters attacking them every week or so.

With another sigh, Mimi recalled her parents and how much she missed them. She was just a small girl, why couldn’t it have been adults that had been sent here? She wished she could be home, helping her mom to cook and listen to her dad’s day, and then to just worry about what set of new clothes she’d go buy the next weekend with her friends.

Oh yeah, that sounds way more interesting. But she does have a good point, whoever is in control of the digital world are a bunch of pricks.

A small sob escaped her mouth, but she soon recovered her composure as she sat up. It wasn’t the time to feel sorry. Things would eventually turn out alright, or so had their friends led her to believe. She wasn’t alone, plus she had Palmon who seemed more than willing to do anything to help her. Her female friends were waiting for her in the onsen, and she knew that they had done a lot to finally find a shelter to be rewarded with the much deserved relaxation.

I have a feeling it's going to occur to her far too late that fancy hotspring shelters are not naturally occuring.

Mimi smiled, forgetting about the bad things and simply started to undress. Everything would be okay. She just had to go join her friends. Her petite naked form had skin soft and white as silk, she knew there would be a nearby onsen with the boys in it, so she had to pick a towel before she’d set out. Grabbing one for her body, Mimi just untied her brown hair to let it loose and then covered her naked form with the bright white towel. Unbeknownst to her, two red eyes were following all her movements ever after having separated from the big group. The invisible host of the mansion the young digidestined had ventured into had decided he would have some fun with them before carrying out his overrated evil plans.

You mean this fancy, well-kept building with two separate hotsprings was a trap? I find that hard to believe, good sir!

As Mimi exited her room, she turned at the sound of a small cackle. She wasn’t sure if it had been her imagination or it had been the wind outside, but she knew they had checked the entire mansion upon entering and nobody else was there. She shook her head, closing the door behind her as she walked over to the onsen area.

I know I hate it when the wind cackles like a Bond villain.

She never realized it, but two corners of the halls traversed, the mysterious observer had shifted the space around her, leading her to the opposite location where she had intended to reach.

"Mwahahahaha! The first part of my evil plan is complete! I've switched all the hallways around, so it'll be REALLY HARD to find what you're looking for! That'll learn 'em!"

Inside the boy’s onsen, Joe’s towel had just been sent flying by two overzealous Tai and Matt, who had forced him nude under their non-private standards. Tentomon, Gomamon, Gabumon and Agumon had all become mysteriously tired all of a sudden; they had asked themselves how it could’ve been possible given the feast they had razed from the tables of the dinning room, but they were safe in the mansion, sleep to recover lost energy from a long day, that’s all they needed.

Again, they are safe in the COMPLETELY WELL-KEPT MANSION IN THE MIDDLE OF NOWHERE. Nope, nothing suspicious here. Let's all get naked and splash around for a while. Oh, and while we're at it, let's leave the person least capable of defending herself alone in her room.

“Augh, I still don’t see why it is absolutely necessary that I remain so… so exposed,” Joe complained as he sat on the smooth rocky floor with his arms around his knees, “This is embarrassing.”

Not as embarrassing as it's going to be when you literally get caught with your pants down in a trap that couldn't be any more obvious if there was a giant anvil suspended from a rope hanging above the mansion.

Tai and Matt seemed to grin, “What, are you afraid we’ll see something embarrassing ourselves?” Tai laughed, Matt and he high-fived. Joe blinked cluelessly. Izzy put his open hand up and curled his fingers one by one. When the fifth finger was curled, Joe suddenly outbursted.

You hear cogs whirring, and smell smoke.

“That’s not what I mean!” he said, red in the face as he splashed a small wave of water over the dynamic duo. Matt and Tai countered with their own splashes, making Izzy subtly crawl away from their childish game to enjoy peace, when his eyes suddenly bumped with two lean legs. Looking up, he saw a long towel covering what seemed to be a feminine shape; once he had made out the sillhouette past all that steam, it hit him: “Mimi…? Mimi?!” he gasped in surprise.

There was Mimi, standing next to the edge of the onsen with her eyes wide. One, two, three… four penises she could see through water. Joe, Matt and Tai joined Izzy’s eyes as he babbled her name. “What are you doing here…?” Mimi asked, “Where are the girls?” she blinked. That’s when it happened.

One! One penis! Two! Two penises! Three! Three pe- Oh forget it, it was a Count from Sesame Street joke.

Tai’s eyes suddenly glowed a bright red before they returned to normal. He stood up, not caring that his underdeveloped manliness was exposed to the female. Mimi blushed and took a step back. “Why don’t you join us, Mimi?” they could hear Tai said. Everyone gasped, Matt tried exchanging looks with the others, but wait… the idea sounded interesting. Izzy was still blushing and maybe even paralyzed, and Joe was about to say something but Matt bashfully interrupted.

"YES. JOIN US. AND THEN AFTER~WARDS WE CAN ALL PLEDGE ALLEGIANCE TO THE DARK MASTER. DOES THAT NOT SOUND LIKE FUN, FRIENDS OF MYSELF?"

“Yeah, c’mon. Join us!” he asked. Mimi didn’t know what to do. Part of her was yelling at her so she would do the same: To yell at them for being perverts. But there was some part of her that was binding here in the spot. She saw Tai take some steps towards her, he was smiling lustfully.

Well, not smiling, per se. More like, walking stiffly, with arms outstretched and a blank look on his face.

“Stop… please… I…” Mimi said in-between gasps. Why couldn’t she move her legs and run away already?! She mentally cursed at her legs, but when she was able to come to Tai was already in front of her, Matt had stood up and walked behind him. He seemed to comfortably give her a smile.

"Come on, Mimi! The Dark Master! Doesn't that sound like fun?"

“It’s okay. We won’t do anything bad, plus you seem ready to dip yourself in!” Matt gently said, only to later see Tai seizing Mimi by her arm and pulling her against her will to the onsen, the girt losing her balance and the towel suddenly flying off.

"BRAIIIINS.."

“Ahh! Wait… Tai! What are you doing?!” Mimi, once again naked, screamed. Why hadn’t any of the girls come to help her yet? The female onsen was just next to the male one! “Let me go!”

"NOT UNTIL YOUR RELINQUISH YOUR BRAINS."

“Come on, Mimi. You’re a pretty girl, we just want to have fun with you!” Tai creepily smiled again, “Don’t worry. We won’t hurt you, that’s a promise,” he winked, Matt reaching to pat Tai on the arm but suddenly feeling reassured and then grinned after Tai in approval.

He's a little TOO eager to follow behind the mind-controlled rapist.

Joe was outraged and he stood up, forgetting about his own nudity, to go to Matt and Tai, placing a hand on Tai’s shoulder to keep him from doing something stupid. Joe then felt some gentle, warm feeling seeping through him, and all of a sudden he forgot he was angry. He looked at Mimi and blushed, he wanted her.

Oh. Well then.

Izzy was lost. What were his elder companions doing? They had seized a defenseless girl and were creepily staring at her naked body, he raised his voice, “Guys, stop. I think you’re hurting her,” Izzy said from his recluded spot. He was blushing too, and it wasn’t the onsen’s temperatures. He was unsure of what to do, three older boys would surely be able to beat him out effortlessly, but this was wrong. He reached to grab Tai by his arm, and then his eyes suddenly fell to Mimi’s crotch. She was hairless, spotless. That slit in the midst of her crotch suddenly felt like heaven for his eyes. Tai finally let go, they boys all had raging hard ons, and Mimi still couldn’t move.

Now Mimi touches Tai and wants to rape herself.

“P-please…” Mimi mumbled, only managing to fall on her butt as four cocks pointed at her. Tai, the leader, was the first to go. Mimi wasn’t moving at all, she was just shaking and hoping this was only a bad dream, what were they going to do to her anyway?!

Yeah, I wonder...

The brown-haired kid was encouraged to go on by his friends, who were smiling devilishly as they stroked themselves. Mimi could see them do that and it disgusted her, but at the same time, she could smell some sort of strong musk in the air; was it theirs? She wasn’t sure, but suddenly she felt troubled with herself, was she… enjoying this sight in particular? Tai reached for her chest, Mimi was flat like any girl her young age, but Tai appeared to know exactly where to touch, his hands squeezed the two almost-invisible mounds, making Mimi whimper and moan, “Tai… Ahhh… what are you doing…?” she cluelessly asked. Was she really, actually enjoying this? She felt her arms and legs relaxing, he wasn’t actually hurting her, just… somehow, whatever he was doing, it felt really good. She felt like screaming at him to continue, but was it right?

Erections.. she's a girl.. what could they be doing...?

That’s when things stopped for a moment. Tai’s hands went back, Mimi’s eyes following them as if they were the most important things of her lives, her lips quivering in anticipation. Tai grinned widely, “Brace, Mimi. You’re going to enjoy this,” he told her.

No, no, I don't think she needs a brace.. she seems quite capable of moving her limbs around without one. Let's just keep thinking..

Tai seemed to be guided by instinct at that point, he went down to spread Mimi’s legs apart. She widened her eyes, “N-no, wait, what are you…?” she was about to say, but without giving her any moment to finish her dreaded question, Tai suddenly went down on his knees and bucked forwards, his rock-hard member piercing into her inexperienced pussy. Mimi went static, her pupils considerably shrinking as her eyes widened like plates. Her body appeared to go limp for a moment as Tai held his cock hilted into her cunt, and slowly her head bent forwards while small trickles of blood joined the onsen water, coming straight out of the rim of her vagina, as Mimi’s head touched the rim of the dry floor near the onsen, they could all listen to her scream in pain, a wild: “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” reverberated in the mansion, although she was unsure if anybody had heard it. She was unsure if this was real, what kind of pain was this? Why was she feeling it? What had she done to deserve it?!

Okay, I've come up with a list of things they're not doing: Playing the banjo, baking a cake, driving a car, making toast, blogging, playing the spoons..

Questions of similar nature continued riddling her already puzzled mind, but Tai didn’t seem to mind. His hips reached back before he thrusted in the same fashion as before. Mimi groaned, her inner canal doing its best to accomodate its first intruder through all that sheer pain. Tai ruthlessly humped, the other boys seemingly just enjoying themselves watching the scene; Mimi honestly wanted to plead for their help but somehow knew it would be futile. Tai would just continue fucking her insensitively.

Oh wait, I've got it! Mimi, I think they're getting ready for se- Oh.

The boy groaned loudly as his orgasm hit him, Mimi feeling some sticky substance entering deeper inside of her. She had tears in her eyes, but she still hadn’t tried to defend herself. She didn’t know if she could move, and somehow her body wouldn’t let her try, she felt Tai come out of her, when Matt went and sat on her stomach, “Augh!” she grunted, Matt weighing her down as he pushed his cock right into her mouth before she could object. Mimi gagged as Matt’s erect penis slid into her mouth, spreading it and causing her to moan muffledly. Matt looked down at her with a sadistic smile, but almost pleadingly said: “Suck it, please?” Mimi was worried about what else they’d do to her if she didn’t comply, so she was quick to do as she was asked. How to do it, though? She didn’t know how to do this, but what had entered her mouth, sans its size, didn’t seem to be any different to a popcicle. She figured all she had to do is keep herself from biting and, closing her eyes, she then proceeded to give head to Matt. She wrapped her young tongue around his shaft as if she was trying to taste it, finding that it wasn’t as disgusting as her first impression had made it out to be. Mimi slowly began liking this, much more so than what Tai had done to her. Matt moaned in joy, something she hadn’t heard Tai do; she briefly opened her eyes while sucking to see him with closed eyes, a pleased expression in his face; she apparently was doing a good job, and she felt a compelling need to continue with the same treatment quality.

If it's anything like a popsicle, I'd end up breaking the god damn tip off and having to get my fingers all sticky.

Her wandering mind’s plans were interrupted though, as Izzy and Joe appeared from each side, sitting on the onsen’s edges and next to Mimi’s head, they finished stroking their dicks and held them out to her; did they want her to suck them too? Joe was the first one to correct her assumption as he softly told her: “Mimi, use your hands. Stroke us off, we want to feel good too.” Izzy nodded as a complement, Mimi was reluctant at first, but she was sucking Matt off, why wouldn’t she obligue to something as simpler as this? Plus it didn’t look like she had much of a choice in it either way.

Good.. point?

Mimi’s silky-smooth hands went to grab Izzy’s cock first and stroked it experimentally. Getting a pleased moan from Izzy she knew she was done the right thing, so, while she still blew Matt, her eyes slid towards Joe’s slightly larger member and gripped it too. She then began giving them her best hand job as they moaned and trashed their heads; either she was too good or they both were as inexperienced as she was and were over-exaggerating their reactions. Minutes went by as Mimi kept her hand and blow jobs firm, Matt beggining to thrust his cock in and out as his orgasm approached, something told her that they were all about to come together. It was then that Tai recovered from his first orgasm, and without any real warning he stood up and thrust inside of Mimi again. Mimi screamed, although it was muffled thanks to Matt’s member. It didn’t feel as bad as before, however. Somehow, Mimi wasn’t feel so much pain as she did earlier, in fact, it felt kind of nice. Tai’s cock was now sliding somewhat more smoothly, and as he began humping her it felt a lot more pleasurable, like some sort of stinging tickle that made her shiver blissfully.

"Stinging Tickles"? I think I have my new band name.

Mimi tried to focus on that feeling, almost forgetting to continue stroking, but she instead gripper harder as Tai began riding her again, and as she stopped fucking, Matt gave her a last hump. Three males moaned out loud, and Mimi suddenly felt goo stick to her hand and face as well as the same substance being forced down her throat. She choked on it out of surprise, but then managed to stabilize herself to drink it until Matt pulled out.

I was going to make a bukkake joke, but there's nothing funny about that.

Tai was still humping her though, it felt great. Joe and Izzy slumped on the sides, and Matt just relaxed beneath her. She felt so dirty. All these guys, taking advantage of her, making her feel so defenceless, yet… somehow, she felt like they truly wouldn’t harm her, she also felt safe. And now Tai was making her feel like heaven. She wanted it to continue!
And it would. The two red eyes above them would make sure it would, one way or the other.

What does he.. gain from this exactly?

That’s when a familiar sound alerted the five kids in the onsen. The door gently opened as another female walked in. Sora was in her pajamas, she had just come from her room and seemed to calling for Mimi, “Mimi? Are you here…?” she asked, appearing to be shocked at the sight of Tai humping Mimi, the rest of the guys with semi-hard cocks gathered around her. It was somewhat arousing to Sora, but she was utterly confused first and foremost. She could swear she had walked from her room and towards the girl’s restroom, how had she ended up in the boys’ onsen…?

"Ha! You went in a different direction than you thought you were going! I bet that's annoying! Victory is mine!"

Sora felt like crying out to Tai to stop. All along she even thought he was a cute gentle boy wanting nothing but their own survival, such a splendid leader, she would even sometimes fantasize with him in secret, but she was seeing him fucking the brains right out of Mimi. The latter didn’t seem to mind, though. Mimi was in such a blissful state, one could see her drool falling off the side of her mouth as she simple leaned on her back and allowed Tai to frenetically take her as he had been doing so far. She was about to step forwards this time, but her body would respond, she soon realized why. Looking to her sides, Matt and Joe had grabbed her by the arms, both smiling at her with that devilish smile Mimi had been tortured with during the past hour. Sora was unable to speak. Joe? The most responsible of them all? Her elder? Their appointed guardian? What had happened to him all of a sudden?!

I wonder if there's something sinister lurking in the obviously evil mansion in the middle of nowhere?

It all became hazy at that point. Sora’s pajamas basically flew through the air as fast as she had come into the room. She was naked and next to Mimi, who had already orgasmed and Tai just wouldn’t stop humping. Izzy had joined him, having turned Mimi on her side as he penetrated her behind; being considerably smaller than Tai, Izzy was able to fit into Mimi just fine, his earlier orgasm having served to lube his cock with his own sperm. Mimi still was blissed, Sora stared, that’s all she could do. She somehow couldn’t talk, she was on all fours, Matt had taken her pussy, also having ripped her virginity away in the process, but her yelp had been muffled by Joe’s cock that had rammed into her mouth almost as violently as Matt had taken. Sora didn’t feel like crying, though. Someway, she felt like she was going to be like Mimi, and soon. Mimi looked pleased, she looked like she wanted more, and it was obvious that she would get more. Both of them were going to get all the wanted. Because the devil wanted it.

I knew this would happen! I told them, but they wouldn't listen! It's all this damn rock music these days!

The End.

Ha ha, rock music. That was a totally funny joke I made right there, and it made total sense too! Well, time to go mas-



Wait, what's going on here?

I know what you did Yesterday, by DragonMasterX.

Aah! Hey, wait, I just finished one! .. What do you mean it wasn't funny? .. It was plenty funny! I made a 'Count' joke! You know, "FOUR PENISES, AHH AH AH!" It's funny because The Count is a character on Sesame Street, and he wouldn't be counting that type of- Okay, whatever, fine.


Kari had never been one to find a lot of fun in mathematics, especially after it had become tenfold harder thanks to the progression of the years at school. Thanks to the defeat of Digimon Emperor Ken, the digidestined had all gotten a small break, but with that came the bearing responsibility of school work. It was one cloudy autumn day that the digidestined of Light had come to the realization she would need help and tutoring in a few specific subjects, and TK had offered her some.

Cue the porno music. "Hey baby, I hear you needing some tutoring?"

She was carrying her books and notepads with her arms around them as she strolled down the street at a moderate pace, not wanting to take her time but didn’t want to rush either. Once in front of her digidestined friend’s place she knocked on the door and was greeted by Ms. Takaishi who looked very pleased to see Kari. Between women they could easily understand each other without even having to speak, and Kari knew that TK’s mother didn’t see her as a just a friend, like TK would speak of her about, but rather a potential girlfriend. With that in mind, Kari knew what words to pick when she would ask questions but today, Kari had just come to truthfully just receive some help with her studies, nothing out of the ordinary and therefore that was all she needed to tell Ms. Takaishi, that quickly informed Kari of her son’s wherebouts. It seems like TK had been in his room all day ever since having returned from school. With a small sigh, Kari just shook her head and went upstairs after Ms. Takaishi encouraged her to.

Damn women, and their psychic powers.

The way down the halls seemed a little heavier than always for Kari. Sure, she always enjoyed TK’s company, but she wasn’t very thrilled about homework. Instead of exchanging stories or perhaps enjoying otherwise different but fun activities she would have to train her eyes on the pages and her fingers to devote themselves to writing equations. She wasn’t normally lazy when it came to her obligations, but when around someone like TK, who she had spent so much time around with, she was more interested in particularly different subjects than proper ones from school.

You know what would be a nice change of pace? If they just sat and did math instead of having sex.

Kari psyched herself up, though. She didn’t want to appear out of focus or much less waste TK’s time, after all she had asked him for help in the first place. “Let’s see, it should be the door on the far end…” she told herself, going back to her earlier visits in her memories. Soon enough, she reached the door and was prepared to knock on it as it was customary, however, the door wasn’t closed. It wasn’t wide open either, just slightly cracked, and Kari could hear something significantly loud for somebody standing so near to notice, she was unable to tell at first, but upon finally being able to discern it, her heart picked up the pace. Someone was moaning in the room, and it wasn’t just somebody, it was TK’s voice that was making all that noise. Kari wasn’t foreign to sex thanks to her older brother and her girlfriend’s relationship, so the first thought that came to her mind was the obvious one. Curiosity won the battle against decency however, and instead of leaving, Kari stepped forwards, edging towards the rim of the door with care not to make her prescence known to the moaning denizen in the room as she lightly pushed the door to broaden the crack to allow her to peek in with some clarity.

So, math is pretty much out of the question now, isn't it?

Her eyes found a dark room, and next of the bed she and TK would always sit on to just talk or play before was the boy himself, sat on a spinning chair with his trademark white hat off his blonde head, his face not directed her way as he seemed too busy staring at the flashing monitor of his personal computer. Kari wondered, but the way that chair was rattling, the hot moans he was crying and the entire situation only made the young girl assume TK had found an interesting web page for adults and was relieving himself just as nicely as his moans were flowing out of his mouth. Kari intently watched him and was tempted to just walk in on him, but what would he say? Would he hate her for it? Would he find it funny or just casual? She didn’t want to risk it at all, in fact, she wanted to just watch him for a little while, a little while longer.

"KARI, OH GOD! How did you get past the unlocked, open door?!"

TK’s eyes were half-closed, the front of his pants had been lowered just so he would be able to grab his malehood and let his balls take some fresh air. The young boy’s eyes kept jumping from picture to picture of suggestively positioned women with conspicuously well-endowed curves, his left hand deftly moving his mouse around to scroll up and down on the gallery as he browsed to his heart’s content as his right hand worked the shaft of his pecker, his tongue licking his lips and swallowing saliva each time he would give himself a break from moaning his head off.

Your mom is in the house, you invited someone over, and you left the door open. You were pretty much asking to get caught here.

Kari was growing increasingly aroused by just watching his chair rattle and hearing him moan, she never really paid much attention to the monitor since most of him blocked sight of it but part of her was hoping he would just expose himself. Her wish was eventually somehow granted, TK spinning just ninety degrees to the left, giving Kari a very good spot to watch his profile side from and at that point became glad he was relieving himself in front of that PC monitor, considering that would keep his attention there and would not by accident turn to see Kari spying on him. Kari’s eyes widened as she saw his hand move like a blur to jack himself off, some of his pre already having smeared the sides of his index and thumb, the friction making some funny sounds with the added speed of his hand motions which tempted Kari to just giggle but she remained mum, just watching her friend masturbate like there was no tomorrow. She gasped as she finished measuring it and guessed TK was about six inches long, the boy was quite well-equipped for his age, it made her legs quiver and she had to push them together to keep herself from shaking. What would he think if she saw her like this? Would he actually want to…?

Why can't I meet a girl like this? I MEAN, LIKE, OPEN. SEXUALLY. NOT THE TEN YEARS OLD PART.

“Ah! KARRRRIII!!!” TK groaned as he came, quickly putting his left hand over his cock to prevent sperm from staining his clothes, he would just wash himself later while making sure his clothes were fine. Kari just stood there, dumbfounded. Whatever he had been masturbating with, he probably had used her as some sort of sexual reference for his fantasies, so could this mean that he actually fantasized with her and never had told her any of it? Had she been that oblivious all the time? She couldn’t think straight with her arousal, however. She had to get out and walk home where she would be able to relieve herself in peace and think about this all. She knew what she wanted to do, but she wouldn’t want to shame him at his own home, oh no, Kari would shed some light on him tomorrow.

I thought they brought the Digimon back with them, where was Patamon during all of this?

She quietly and carefully left the scene whilst TK recovered from his orgasm and walked down to the hall where she met Ms. Takeishi again, “Oh, uhm…” Kari stuttered, having forgotten about the mother, “I remembered I have something important to do, so I’m going home!” she quickly said, speeding past the older woman who only blinked and then shrugged as Kari disappeared from her sight past the door.

No Freudian slips? Alright, I'll do it.

"I just remembered I have someone- someTHING to do, heh, so I'll just be coming- GOING. H-home, that is. Going home. I'm not moist. .. gottagobye!"


The next day, the sun shone brightly in contrast to the prior date, Kari thought it perfect to set the mood for her plan. Arriving at the school just in time, she heard a familiar voice. It was TK. “Heeeey! Kari! Wait up!” he called. Upon catching up with her, the boy panted from the sprint and then let out a small breath of relief, “You sure like putting on your rocket shoes every morning, huh?” he chuckled.

"I was like, five feet in front of you. Are you sweating?"

Kari giggled back at him, “Oh, I just like being on time, is all!” she smiled warmly to him, hiding her intentions for a bit. TK rubbed behind his head, ruffling his bright white hat slightly.

"On time for the sex, that is."

"Naturally."


“Hey, weren’t you coming down yesterday? Y’know, Maths?” the boy innocently questioned. Kari didn’t make herself wait at all.

“Oh, I did come. And so did you,” she replied with a small smirk. TK seemed dumbstruck by the extra in her sentence.

“You did? I… what?” the digidestined of Hope babbled, looking quite confused himself.

"What could she possibly mean by that?!"

Kari giggled again, “You’re so cute when you get nervous like that. But there’s no need to be shy around me, you know? We’ve known each other for so long, after all.”

“Kari…?” TK asked with a pleading frown that was almost asking: “What’s this all about?”

Let's not start this again.

Not wanting to embarrass him in public, she just leaned forwards and deviously smiled as she put her soft lips next to his ear, making TK blush as he initially expected a kiss out of nowhere with the gesture. She stopped there and just softly whispered: “I know how messy you got yesterday, TK. I know what you did,” this startled TK and he nearly darted backwards but somehow his legs wouldn’t move; he was paralyzed. In fact, he didn’t want to move away, it was an odd feeling, he almost felt his pants tent when she said that; maybe this was turning him on.

"She knows about the murders!"

“Y-you do…?” he repeated, blushing.

“Mm-hmm...” Kari teasingly smiled, “And I’d like to lit up the fire of your fantasies…” she softly said, making TK briefly bit his lower lip as she put three fingers on his chest, gently caressing him, “What do you say? Will you meet little ‘ol me in the girls’ bathroom later?” she finally asked, stepping back and winking up at the blonde kid with a big smile.

The girls' bathroom? I mean, the wide-open door worked so well last time, what are the chances of them getting caught in there?

TK could only slowly nod. She then turned warm again, with that agreeable smile that would say: “It’s settled then!” and then he saw her running off into the building. TK however was still standing there, still dumbstruck, still not believing the girl of her dreams had just secretly asked him for a fuck.

Little did he know, leaving people in the middle of the street with boners is like a sport to Kari.

“Hey man! Watch it, you’re in the waaaaaay!” a familiar voice made TK spin a hundred and eighty only for his eyes to widen as a skidding shape crashed on him.

“Aaaaah!” TK grunted as he fell on his butt, “Reality-checks hurt…” he half-groaned as he rubbed his sore behind, looking forwards to see who had just ‘bumped’ on him, “Huh? Davis?”

Well, it's better he fell on his ass rather than the other way around, or he'd be firmly planted in the ground right now.

“Ouch, ouch, oww…” the goggle-head moaned in pain as he rubbed his head, “Hey, they don’t make the lanes for day-dreamer posts, do they? What were you thinking, TK?” he complained. TK blinked, unbelieavable!

You have time to spot and then yell at somebody, but you couldn't stop from running full force into them?

“And here I thought I was just another harmless pedestrian,” the boy sarcastically said, getting up to his feet and shook his head, being reminded of class and his later date with Kari, “Ahh, gonna be late, see ya later Davis!” he said before running off. The brown-haired youth looked intently on his friend and then snarled.

".. Did he have an erection?"

“Sure, I’m alright! Thanks for asking!” he grumpily got up, folding his arms before following his classmate while eyeing him along the way, having found it odd that he hadn’t been his usual helpful self even after an accident caused by well, none other than Davis himself.

Class was rather uneventful, the kids greeted, the teacher taught and they learned. Save for Davis who kept bouncing his eyes from Kari, who he already stared at everyday, to TK who were intently staring at each other as if not even caring about the rest of the world, the class was pretty much normal. “What the heck?!” Davis shouted to himself in his head, “Did we enter the Twilight Zone or something today? I AM supposed to be the one exchanging looks with Kari, not TK!” he grunted to himself, folding his arms and sulking as if he were some sort of spoiled child being denied his toy.

Meanwhile, the Digimon are sitting somewhere, starving, wondering where the hell everybody is.

After the break was announced by the dinging bell, TK watched leave from his seat and gulped. They really were going to do it, and she seemed determined about it. He wondered how exactly she had seen what she said she had, and if she was a virgin either way. He was, but if she wasn’t… Now wasn’t the time to think about that, either way. He left his things in place for the next period and walked off after Kari to make sure it wouldn’t be so obvious to the rest; however, they both had been on someone else’s sight for quite a while already.

TK walked off aimlessly at first, making sure he consumed the time for his break, all the while he was being stalked by Davis who would pick clever places to hide in, like busted lockers or big trash cans. He just had to know what the squirt was up to.

Damn. I already made a "How Not To Be Seen" joke.

Eventually, the bell sounded again and everyone sans TK and his ‘invisible’ stalker walked the halls back to their respective classrooms. Much to Davis’ dismay, TK suddenly turned a corner and inadvertly went inside the girls’ restroom, which made the newer digidestined widen his eyes. “What in the…?” he gasped, intently following TK but just peeked inside.

In the bathroom, Davis was able to discern two figures walking towards each other and hugging. A small giggle escaped the one that wasn’t TK, and upon seeing the pink arms of Kari’s long shirt he was able to tell who she was right away. “MotherF-” he instantly threw his hands in front of his mouth to silence himself as he watched TK and Kari make out while TK embraced her and she groped his buttocks. Davis could plainly see them exchanging saliva when their tongues came out to wrestle in air; their eyes were closed and all he could see was how eager she was by lowering his pants as he deftly went down to unbutton her shorts; Davis wondered how she could enjoy the weather they were having with those shorts she always wore but then again it was sunny outside and it had warmed up a bit; the buttons came loose and they both exposed to each other, Davis was on the verge of swearing again, but kept his lips pursed and his hands joined in a basket in front of his face except his eyes.

So they're making out and about to have sex, and he's thinking about the weather and Kari's choice of clothes?

“A-are you sure?” Davis heard TK ask as Kari softly put a hand on his cheek and gently nodded to her lover. Davis almost bit his own tongue off after the girl she had been chasing ever since the start of the year was about to lose her virginity to one of his biggest friends and rivals. He wasn’t sure about what to do, but if things were as they seemed, Kari had obviously made a choice. He still was curious though, and continued peeking.

"She's wearing THOSE underwear with THOSE socks? Eww!"

Kari slowly put her arms up and around TK’s neck as he walked forwards and walled her against a stool. This was like the fantasy he had dreamt of. Of course, he had pictured them under a warm shower in a spotless place with bright candles and silence instead of a school restroom with the unpleasant murmuring of every classroom in the building; at least they were in the girls’ one. TK was nervous, but sure of himself. To him, this was like a dream, and in case it really was one, he wanted to make the most of it. He grabbed Kari by her butt and used his strength to pull her up, the wall helping with the support as well as Kari’s arms around his neck, so it was quite a comfortable position they were in to say the least.

As comfortable as cold bathroom tile can be, anyway.

TK was hard already, and Kari’s pussy was spotless. The boy wasn’t sure if it was normal for her, but she really was hairless down there, that pussy looked so inviting. If she hadn’t been as eager as he was, he might’ve wanted to experience oral sex with her, but alas, their carnal desire for each others’ parts was stronger than their passion. “Here I go, Kari…” TK announced, tightening his grip while Kari closed her eyes.

Kari felt TK thrust inside of her, his cock tearing through her hymen and her body convulsed with a muffled grunt as compliment. She held the scream of pain inside of her as blood began dripping down the boy’s cock. He was about to ask about her well being but she was quick to intercept: “TK, kiss me…” she sighed, accepting his lips as they came in contact with hers after a gentle push of her hands on his neck.

Lots of torn hymens today.

The two young lovers then began to make out again, all the time while Davis became increasingly hornier and began stroking himself at the arousing sight of watching Kari getting fucked wildly. TK wanted to make sure Kari was in the best position however, and before he actually proceeded to fuck her with increased speed he gently moved his hands under her thighs and pulled her legs around his waist to allow her to wrap them behind his back for added support; with that, he returned one of his hands to her ass and the other one was placed on the wall beside Kari’s chest to make sure they would remain firm.

Nothing could possibly ruin this moment, with the exception of, you know, a girl needing to use the bathroom.

Davis put his unoccupied hand in front of his mouth to help himself from groaning noticeably whilst he continued masturbating and watching TK and Kari’s intercourse. The two youngsters thrust at each other, albeit Kari’s efforts were lesser thanks to both her inexperience and position, she was concerned about losing her grip on TK even after she had basically glued her arms and legs around his body but she trusted him to handle it like the man she hoped him to be. Alas, she wasn’t disappointed, or at least she couldn’t say she was, thanks to TK’s passionate efforts to ride her gently, yet confidently. The pressure in all three bodies was raising constantly, be it for inserting, receiving or jacking off, their pleasure counters were reaching the point of no return very fast. The symphony of moans was obviously secluded in the confines of the bathroom but it was clear that the sex was much more than that, yet their hormones did not care, and they continued fucking like animals in heat and Davis kept stroking himself, his pre starting to wet his own working hand as his eyes began to shut down.

Huh. Masturbating CAN make you go blind. Who knew.

They entered bliss together, all three of them. TK and Kari screamed into each others’ mouths and Davis on his muffling hand, the sound being held back thankfully.

Their climaxes, nay.

The End.

.. What do you mean this one wasn't any funnier? I made a gay joke! Who am I talking to?
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