+- Digiartists' Domain Community! (https://digiartistsdomain.org/phpboard)
+-- Forum: Author's Den (https://digiartistsdomain.org/phpboard/forumdisplay.php?fid=54)
+--- Forum: The Author's Domain (https://digiartistsdomain.org/phpboard/forumdisplay.php?fid=12)
+--- Thread: A preview to my newest story (Zephyrmon/Flamedramon) (/showthread.php?tid=4793)
Pages:
1
2
- Wisemon - 05-02-2006
Quote:What you mean is that the whole 02 dimension should be another part of Sephirothmon with what you said Wise?According to Megchan, the Japanese name for Mercuremon's beast spirit is actually Sefirotmon, but yes, that's what I'm saying. When you think about everything that would mean, it's a total mind fuck.
- DragonMasterX - 05-02-2006
Quote:Tense issues. You switch back and forth between present and past at random.
I get what you say, I seem to write and not really look if I made a mistake with those because I think it's already ok- but thanks, now I know where I should reinforce.
Quote:Quote:Quote:According to Megchan, the Japanese name for Mercuremon's beast spirit is actually Sefirotmon, but yes, that's what I'm saying. When you think about everything that would mean, it's a total mind fuck.
What you mean is that the whole 02 dimension should be another part of Sephirothmon with what you said Wise?
I may need to look at it better, because I saw that the name was Sephirothmon- but maybe I'm wrong. Anyways, I still need to think deeper that idea of the corelation between universes *rubs forehead with a paw* That's confusing me... I think I'm not going to play with matter transferring in my next story... x.x
- UnknownH - 05-02-2006
Sefirotmon is another way of spelling it. Its a jewish thing.
And the whole universe in him thing could be a real brain wreck.
- DragonMasterX - 05-02-2006
So Sephirotmon isn't bad afterall, great.
And your right... how about setting it that the massive amount of data from the HoneyBeemon dissorted part of Sephirotmon's own dimension and opened the rift to the 02's dimension? would that work?
- UnknownH - 05-03-2006
It sounds workable. You could probally do that.
- DragonMasterX - 05-03-2006
Great to know, I already set it and it sounds neat- I'm already in page 12 :3
- Lonely Werewolf - 05-04-2006
Yup, definitely, I read his other page which is Zephyrmon and Flamedramon is in...L**e << you know what's that word means. :P
It's quite good lemon, full with drama and action. I'd like to write a lemon, but i prefer to do a lemon with omeone online, through conversation in MSN.