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Flamey - Jukebox Hero - 06-01-2004
Well i just finished my second drawing, and since i havent posted the first one here, thats up as well.
Note that, i am new at this sort of thing, and with some help maybe i could improve.
![[Image: efdfdcadcc39769eb2819d2cd70efeec.jpg]](http://onfinite.three10.com/libraries/16651/efdfdcadcc39769eb2819d2cd70efeec.jpg)
![[Image: efdfdcadcc39769eb2819d2cd70efeec.jpg]](http://onfinite.three10.com/libraries/16652/efdfdcadcc39769eb2819d2cd70efeec.jpg)
- Red Mage Dragon Tiamat - 06-01-2004
*drools* Flameys....
- FinalEnix - 06-02-2004
THAT THAT THAT is the reason of live and flamy fans
- Jukebox Hero - 06-02-2004
Tia, Enix, many thanks ^.^
- Stormy Wizard - 06-02-2004
Well done, I definitely see improvement in the second picture. You've done the size scaling accurately and the detail is superb, and the lines are acceptable as well. The pose, hmm... it looks like he could be getting ready to attack something small, or just checking the ground beneath him, appropriate enough. The only thing that could have improving is shading, like where is the light shining, and maybe about his armour? And sorry to be picky, but his left foot seems a bit small (sorry), but that's okay, feet are positively hard to draw, especially when they're facing directly toward the POV.
You've truly shown the greatness of Flamedramon, great job
Ranking - 9/10
Which is: Excellent work
- urban dream - 06-02-2004
I definitely do like the second one. He looks really huge and powerful, something not many artists can get across. Plus, your style of colourisation looks cool.
- Jukebox Hero - 06-03-2004
Thank you kindly Urban, and Stormy.
Stormy your critique is very helpfull, the light is very general, and off in many areas
- Blackwargreymon Lover - 06-03-2004
I really like those. They are pretty well done for a beginner artist (which you claim to be, that's why I say this). There are a few mistakes (which Stormy pointed out already), but it's still good. Can't wait to see more.
- Red Mage Dragon Tiamat - 06-03-2004
yeah, make more Flameys. ^^ And you are doing good on him. ^^
Re: Flamey - Flamedramon lover - 07-19-2004
you got skills i like them i wish i could draw like that