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"Disclaimer: I don't own neither the songs i used nor I own Digimon. I don't become money for my storys, and hey i like them....
Let's stop this and beginn the story:

Little A/N: I translated this story from my german story (Liebeskaraoke mit dunkelen Folgen (love karaoke with dark consequences)

It was a balmier Saturday evening, the digidestined has been invited to go to karaoke, just to celebrate the victory of the fight against Malomyotismon and the new friendships with the many digidestined over the world, but the celebrate was for the japanese digidestined only.
But one doesn't wanna celebrate.... Davis is often sad this time.
The heir of the crest of courage and friendship doubt, he doubt about himself and what he is doing. The darkness grows in him, it eat itself into his soul and his mind. The crest doesn't glow anymore, they don't hear what he is telling them because his doubts...
Their wearer needs a strong will and the attribute of the crest, these things that makes him problems, too.
Kari, T.K. and Tai fetched everyone and brought them to the Karaoke. It is for them only.
"First, welcome my dear friends! This is the "Fu-Ji-Sen" Karaoke !" (A/N: Don'T know the english word of the Karaoke "pub"), wished Tai them all welcome. Everyone sat on the settle, Tai stand on the pedestal and guide them what should happen today.
"First i have to instruct, we wanna have fun and should not be sternly. Love message has been calculated that could be tell here, don't be too strict to tell someone something like that if you like someone so much. "
he smiled and looked to Sora, she saw to Tai.
"Because it seems like noone planned something important for tommorow, because of that we won't end this celebrate till the dawn! The landlord, a old friend of my father, insured that enough beds are available if someone is want some sleep. The songs can be choose by yourself, but have to find someone who start to sing. "
After that the sermon, a short moment of silence filled the room.
Like expected, Tai sighed.
"I thought you would like karaoke more than that... "
"I wanna beginn !""

That is the first part of the english translation of my story "Love karaoke with dark consequence" ("Liebeskaraoke mit dunkelen Folgen").
What do you think about it ?
seems pretty good ^^